TPO41 Independent
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
access to up to date and correct information has always been a critical issue among students and educated people. one of the main sources of this kind of information in the past was teachers. While some people believe that government might do more support of teachers if they want to retain education at a high level. there are others holding the view that, there is no reasons make them specialize in other careers. As far as I am concerned, teachers behavior in class and how they treat an educate students to have long and critical effects of the future of society. I will vindicate my standpoint hereunder.
The first point juts out of the mind is the fact that, nowadays, an exponentially increase in information and technology accrued. Therefore, the only source of reliable data, expert teachers, might forget. An example can illustrate this unappreciated. when I was a child, if one of our teachers give a research subject to us, we go to one another teacher to ask about that and note his opinion. I mean teacher was a symbol of knowledge to us. there was no other source. As a result, all of student and adult people make respect to their teachers in society.
The second point that is worth considering is the fact that today age of the teachers is so low. because students finish their education so fast and take a career. However they don't try to increase their knowledge, may be a cause of easy access to data via the internet. But in the past, teachers had to study in various branches to be up to date and responsible. In addition, a high number of educated persons, who have demanded this career, government pay them less salary. Consequently, as a person of society, when you faced with a young teacher with a shallow of knowledge, maybe you did not value as past.
To make a long story short, other sources of information, low government support, young age, and the shallow knowledge are the reasons can be mentions of less appreciate a value by society. we do not forget that teachers still are one of the more important persons, who have to sever effect on the society future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Access
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...nt to retain education at a high level. there are others holding the view that, there...
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Suggestion: there are no reasons
...there are others holding the view that, there is no reasons make them specialize in other careers. ...
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...of the mind is the fact that, nowadays, an exponentially increase in information and technology accrued. ...
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...at today age of the teachers is so low. because students finish their education so fast...
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, i mean, in addition, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6747311828 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66122379628 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7335228046 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8095238095 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168142155942 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441390666669 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437916256646 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104264033421 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166959235148 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.