What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Every person must respect his mother and his father, is a common quality that all good sons have. No matter what our parents have done before, above all they are our parents. By the way, I was educated to think like that. I have been realizing that nowadays the kids’ education has changed a lot. And essential qualities like respect is getting down, the pity of it all is that people are getting used to act like.
Respect it is the most important one, but there are other qualities needed to be a good son: like patience, complicity, attention, goodness and love. A good child usually never forget all your parents have done for him. Unfortunately, these qualities are getting lost these days. I fell so upset when I see a son act with rudeness about their parents. I am scared about how easier we can these scenes. For instance, I was in the supermarket with my mom and I saw a kid about seven years old beating up his mom because he want to buy something. I really did not believe in what I was seeing. Unhappiness, this is not an isolate situation, things like that been happen by all the time around the world.
Personally, I love my parents. And I want to take care of them, right now and especially when they will get old. I really would like to do what they did about me when I was a kid. They give me love, attention and mainly they give me education. I guess that I learned to be a good daughter and my mom and daddy loves me. But I need to confess that I feel scared to think about to have a son. Because I am terrifying about behavior changes that been happen with kids last days.
Love is essential and if we put it in mind, sure we will be a good son or daughter. And our parents will have the children they deserved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...was educated to think like that. I have been realizing that nowadays the kids' education ...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...years old beating up his mom because he want to buy something. I really did not beli...
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Line 2, column 618, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... I was seeing. Unhappiness, this is not an isolate situation, things like that been happen...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...solate situation, things like that been happen by all the time around the world. Pers...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el scared to think about to have a son. Because I am terrifying about behavior changes ...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...ifying about behavior changes that been happen with kids last days. Love is essentia...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s will have the children they deserved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, for instance, i feel, i guess, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28181818182 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37353212093 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1380654729 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.2272727273 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199927741998 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566166704066 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505099771865 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121812201758 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514009820496 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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