There are many methods provided by schools to ensure the students’ success in their studies. Personally, I tend to choose a high-quality education in high school as the most important factor in students’ success, which lays a solid knowledge base for students when they enter universities.
First of all, having access to the university tutors for help may hamper the students independent learning process in the college. We can image if a student can receive individual instructions from their tutor for some difficult homework, the student may be unwilling to think any difficult problems they encountered in their assignments to solve them. Besides, there are abundant online learning resources nowadays for students to find the answers for their homework. Instead of independent thinking and searching other helpful resource to solve their problems, students may get used to direct help from their tutor and lose the chance to learn independently. Thus, the students may not be able to make success in their university study.
Secondly, although support and encouragement of family and friends are significant in our whole life, they are not the most important factor in students’ success. When a student goes into university, the difficulties he or she meets in homework cannot be easily solved just by any support and encouragement, that is to say the advantages of support and encouragement from family and friends are limited in students’ study. For instance, I had a serious cold when I was freshman in my university and I had to apply sick leave for one month, which lagged my study behind. I was so uneasy and anxious and the support and comforts from my family and friends were not a relief for me. Then everything went smoothly when I went back to school and studied hard to catch up my study.
Finally, a high-quality education from excellent teachers in high school is the most important factor for students’ success in universities. For one thing, a high-quality of education provide us the basic knowledge we need in the university. For example, when I entered the university in the first year, I found it was quite easy for me to follow math class, because my high school is famous for its high-quality of math teaching and I performed well in my math back then. Thus, I can easily track any difficulties I meet in my math homework when I was in university. By contrast, because my high school teachers were not good at English teaching, which resulted my bad performance in English even impeded my understanding of English Literature class in university. For another, good high-quality education in high school would culture the confidence for students, which also helpful in their college study. When students have difficulties in their study, they would tend to believe that they own the ability to solve them. Therefore, the confidence would encourage them to find the answers for their problems and they would be more confident when they succeed. In this way, this good cycle continues with their study.
To conclusion, an individual tutor and encouragement from others are not the most crucial factors in helping students’ success in university, because students may become more dependent supported by these methods. However, I believe that a high-quality in high school helps students’ success in university by providing them a sound knowledge base and more confidence to solve problems in their study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or students when they enter universities First of all having access to the univer...
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...ol and studied hard to catch up my study Finally a highquality education from exc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all, for one thing, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2806.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98401420959 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7624604808 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.401420959147 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 563.0 20.1344086022 2796% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2806.0 100.406767564 2795% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 563.0 20.6045352989 2732% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 170.0 5.45110844103 3119% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44204982222 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.44204982222 0.076458572812 578% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278972684866 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034371595901 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 283.5 11.7677419355 2409% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -499.97 58.1214874552 -860% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 222.9 10.1575268817 2194% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 34.25 8.01818996416 427% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 227.2 10.0537634409 2260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 223.0 10.247311828 2176% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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