When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
• asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
• finding information about the problem using the Internet
• taking a long time to think about the problem
In this fast growing world, when industrialization and technological advancement have taken a major role, technology particular internet has significant impact on our life. I feel using internet to search on some information is the best way to solve difficult troubles. This is because internet is the fastest and most convenient sort of technologies people can use and people can take an advice online. I feel this way due to two reasons I will explore in this essay.
First of all, recent decayed shows that internet is an important element to have a good and healthy life. None of us can deny how internet helps people to solve vast of problems within about seconds on different ways. Talking about me as an example, personally I faced anusual health issues when I borne my first child, after few months of the delivery, I felt that I had stress, anxious disorder, insomnia and hormonal changes so; I searched on internet many sort of websites to seek on the same symptoms that I had. Consequently, I found many valuable and useful information about the symptoms which is all lead to depression. The depression wasn’t in severing stage so; I followed many strategies from internet particular women health website, YouTube videos, and recent studies as a result, I got better and cured. Similarly, I struggled at the beginning to find a trusty website and people have to be careful searching on information which could be wrong if so; they can take their times to think about the problems they faced or they can ask other people who they have more experiences than they do.
Secondly, life is changing each moments and peoples’ problems increased drastically, in this modern society which everything look luxurious, people can solve many problems online. They can talk to expertise to seek some help. Internet allows workers to talk to their manager or companies owner to solve problems related to changes of companies’ profit. Talking about my peer as an example, she is owner of Sony series, the company that makes smart phones, laptops, and software. When she was over the seas, she faced an obstacle about a huge loss of profits, she talked to her employees and managers by using face time and Skype apps to solve a problem the company’s’ faced. As a result, they tried to fix the mistakes which it happened once ago and they got success.
To put it in a brief, I strongly agree that internet enhance people to solve problems because it is one of the easiest ways people can use and it helps person and team member to talk online for seeking help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sort seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sorts'.
Suggestion: many sorts
...onal changes so; I searched on internet many sort of websites to seek on the same symptom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, i feel, sort of, talking about, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86848072562 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78108646484 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53514739229 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3092962503 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.294117647 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9411764706 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298010578129 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927482680533 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656290804124 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171990522975 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401347955841 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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