Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child?
1.being helpful 2.being honest 3.being well organized
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Research showed that children's personality will be formed when they are young. It means this time is the most significant part of the life of a person and thus people who contact with children in that time have a crucial role in children's life. There are many striking features which are positive and negative that children may absorb them easily from their parents and friends. As far as I am concerned, I agree that being honest is the most important value to share with a young child because of several reasons including it helps children to be grown properly and it is useful in their future life.
The first reason of current discussion is how children should be prepared for the future. Nobody is important here except parents. In this regard, it should be noted that parents have a direct effect on their children. If they learn them to be honest, they will get its positive result in their children's behavior. In other words, children will be used in telling truth to parents about their daily activities and it helps parents to control them easily. Conversely, imagine a child who is accustomed to cheating their parents and can hide his activity and thus parents may not be able to control him and he will face problems in his life. Therefore, being honest is the most considerable trait which has substantial influence in children's growth.
Another noteworthy reason is the effect of honesty in children's future life. In this case, it seems logical to say that if we try to be honest with people around us, they want to have contact with us in the different aspects of life such as social issues or financial subjects. With this in mind, we can say that by learning children, to be honest, we help them to have many opportunities about various issues in their future life. For instance, my little brother who is so clever in mathematic will be work in my uncle's office in next years after graduation since he attracted my uncle by his honest in life and thus this chance helps him to be improved in life and have sufficient income. Therefore, being honest has a profound effect on children's future life.
In conclusion, being honest is the most momentous value which helps children not only to be grown properly but also it has lots of advantages for their future life. It is worth noting that each value has its advantages but from my point of view being honest to help children to have an incredible experience in their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6976744186 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4522304722 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458139534884 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0282581026 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309489724284 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130834263033 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896538668007 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234310673271 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309229015916 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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