Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends. a. joining a sports team, b. participate in community activities, c. traveling.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">When you first entered the university, you will find various ways to better integrate into the new life. Personally speaking, doing sports is the best way among the three options to make more and better friends.
To begin with, joining sports teams would be a good choice, simply because it could create an atmosphere to meet different people with the same interests. Let me take how I met my best university friend Oliver as a good example. Frankly speaking, I had known Oliver much earlier before we finally became good friends. What I knew about him was that he was an entirely different person from me. One day, when we both applied to join the basketball team, we had our first conversion. It was till then that I realized that we actually shared so much in common. For instance, we both liked the same basketball star, and when we played the game, we could cooperate like twins. We spent much time training together, and also deepened the understanding of each other. Had I not attended the sports team, I would have not known Oliver so well and we could have still been strangers.
Speaking from the Chinese perspective, I am not in favor of the idea of making more friends by attending community activities, simply because those attendants are normally seniors, with whom I, as a young college student, seldom share common topics, in some Chinese communities where communal get-togethers have become a routine schedule. Last time, my friend Oliver went to attend a community activity out of curiosity, and it turned out to be a nightmare. He had expected to meet some friends at his age but disappointedly, he could talk to nobody but old men. The old mainly talked about the marriage issues of the grandchildren, where to have the next square dance celebration and which supermarket to take discounts. Oliver found it difficult to fit into these topics, and he was also not willing to. He swore that he would not go there again.
As for the traveling option, although there are so many good reasons to believe that it is great since people could always meet interesting peers and funny things on the way, it is not the best choice for me, simply because I cannot easily prepare a few days off and enough money to spend. On one hand, as I am sitting here taking the exam, it is easy to conclude that I am a student. I do not see any chance for me to get several days away from my heavy daily study. On the other hand, I also did some calculations. If people wish to enjoy a happy holiday, they have to prepare at least 3000 dollars for a 7-day trip. I checked my bank account and decided to postpone my traveling dream to my later life stage.
Overall, doing sports would be a great way to develop friendships and integrate into a new college study life.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, frankly, if, so, still, then, well, as for, at least, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71026156942 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76555824558 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557344064386 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1389005553 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5416666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7083333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207180788907 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479886397215 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056076288983 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119306103333 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549707787356 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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