Would you prefer to take a part-time course or have a part-time job during your summer vacation?
Summer vacations is really a good oportunity to try others new things that normally you don't have time to try.
We can use this time to do some activities like: to take time to rest and relax your mind, to do courses, to know new places traveling and also to have a periodic job.
To choose which opition would be better for you it depends of your current situation. For example, if you have extra money, you can travel and know new places, relaxing your mind, or you can try new courses to get some extra knowledge, giving many informations for your brain. However, if extra money is not your case, you can try to do some job to save money and also to get experience, which would be useful in the future.
I really would prefer to take a part-time of my summer vacation having extra courses, learning about other subjects, that I usually don't have time to learn. I belive that the best type of exercise that we can do is with our mind, so the higher the informations that we can have the better our mind will be. In my oppion, spend a part-time of summers vacation doing courses is the better oppition because can give us different skills, can be included in your curriculum, and perhaps it can make us to have more attention when trying to get a job. Also, we can have opportunities to discovery some abilities in different areas, that we problably will not have, studying or doing always the same things.
But, actually, in this period of my life, my decision would be to spend a part-time of my vacations taking a job, because saving some extra money can be useful and will allow me to foccus a bit better in my activities when I will not be in my vacations. Sometimes is hard to mantain foccus and get great results during college our degree when you need to work to effort yourself. So, if I need to choose today which one would be better for me, I totally would prefer to take a job.
Concluding my idea, for me it is so much better to try new courses besides to have a job during summer vacation, but, considering my actual life would be better for me to save some extra money and getting news skills than try to do courses.
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Message: The adverb 'Sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36842105263 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3612720472 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4335839599 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.006485713 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6923076923 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368458796668 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153571557921 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999038534068 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205072484355 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589899698792 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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