You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper Agree or disagree

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You should not believe everything that you read in the newspaper? Agree or disagree

Today we are living in digital world. Newspaper was most important thing to get updated timely about the events going around in the world . we can get informations about stocks , sports , any crises etc. The best thing about newspapers is every day people start their morning by reading newspapers . As earlier only limited newspaper companies were their so whatever they print people believe it but now the scenarios changed as due to digitalization you are not only depend on newpapers and thus you dont need to just relay on the news whatever printed on newspaper.
Firstly , they were many newspaper companies available . Every companies wants that there newpaper should sell more and due to that sometimes they put the news in some dramatic way to get more attention of there readers. Yes ofcourse, there were news which may be very useful to us and we can get benifited from that into our day to day life like about sports , any assembly decisions or worls wide problems so that that keep us aware about things . although there were some that cannot be reliable totally .
Moreover, my own experience about the newspaper is not so good . when I was in 12th we had some exams issues so we were reading updates from newspaper everyday . one day morning I read some news I got panicked and then after I got to know that the news printed in that newspaper was there selfbuilted story and not the true news . so in newspaper there were something that can misinterpret us about some news .
Further, they were some polictical involvemnts in some newspaper . If some newspaper companies had some problem with one polictical perties they print all negative issues against that and manipulate the readers about the same . and in some case oppsite parties t the time of election gave some good amount of many to companies to create caos among citizens .
Thus I don’t believe that everything which you read is newspaper is totally correct . ofcourse there is some trial and occur present so you should choose wisely.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84256559767 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49629200324 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518950437318 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6908861348 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202128248384 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765818467103 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987099529412 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155213202906 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145471903555 0.0645574589148 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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