Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is a cycle of trial and errors till you reach a point of financial, emotional, and social stability. Here the topic suggests that young people tend to enjoy their lives more than older people, and I personally, tend to agree with the idea. Young people tend to live a more carefree, non-answerable life, helping them take decisions that they like with almost zero consequences.
One of the most primary aspects in this is the extra zeal and vigour for living to the fullest which makes young people enjoy their lives way more than any other age group. The newly formed optimistic world view, a world where they are the superstars and nothing bad can happen to them, helps them take risks and chances that older people are afraid to try out. For children, this free mindset comes from no tension of failing thus in turn they are not even scared of starting something back from square one. The biggest example for this is the youth's growing craze for adventure sports. Skydiving, paragliding, and scuba diving were generally considered dangerous sports, thus older generation might be scared for their life and refrain from participating in such activities. But these young people's unconcerned attitude and their high appetite for taking risks makes them enjoy these adrenaline boosting sports.
Furthermore, building on that, younger people today genuinely believe in investing in experiences over short term gains, therefore making them take decisions which prioritise their happiness and mental satisfaction over others. When compared to youngsters, the older people still consider investments and monetary safety for the future as key to happiness. They were born in a time, where our country was a young democracy, thus opportunities were few while survival was key. They have been classically trained, to look after their family and to hustle for a better future. Meanwhile, the younger people have the mental fortitude to leave family, jobs, and everything, to roam around the world in search for what makes them happy. People today believe that investing in yourself and your happiness, is far more valuable than money and a happy mind will help you earn exponentially in the future.
Finally, before concluding, young people nowadays then to follow passions but they also accept their physical and mental limitations. The increasing awareness about body positivity or mental health, anxiety, and other illnesses helps youngsters feel more confident in their own skin. Knowing that they are not alone in this, gives them the motivation to fight these things. Knowing your flaws and limitations and being aware of the uncertainty of life also helps you enjoy your life more than the older generation.
In conclusion, younger generation consider self-happiness and self-satisfaction as the biggest virtues, thus making themselves confident of their decisions and in turn helping them enjoy their lives and have a greater control over life than the previous generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this adrenaline' or 'these adrenalines'?
Suggestion: this adrenaline; these adrenalines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2505.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22964509395 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66074972297 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546972860125 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0534902136 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.95 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275074488183 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088253269839 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760615499093 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166774269462 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655613400338 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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