In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explore

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In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explorers known as the Norse, who traveled across the Atlantic Ocean and came into contact with Native Americans almost a thousand years ago.
However, some archaeologists believe that the coin is not a genuine piece of historical evidence but a historical fake: they think that the coin was placed at the site recently by someone who wanted to mislead the public. There are three main reasons why some archaeologists believe that the coin is not genuine historical evidence

The article states that an old European silver coin detected at American archaeological site are fake products brought by explorers. Some people assume that someone recently placed the coins at this site. The reading passage mentions that the coin is not actual historical evidence and states three main reasons to support this idea. However, the professor refutes each of these reasons.
First, the reading claims that they were long-distance between where the coins were discovered and the site where Norse inhabited there; it is more than a thousand kilometers. In contrast, the professor mentions that many other objects found in the same area also came from far away. The people who traveled from North America brought these materials from Norse settlements during their travels and brought the coins back to their settlements.
Second, the article states that just limited coins were found at the Canadian sites that were Norse people inhabited there. However, the lecturer claims that the Norse had no permanent settlements, and when they returned to Europe, they packed up all their valuable things, including their coins.
Finally, the reading passage asserts that the Norse would have no reason to bring coins to the new site. On the contrary, the professor refutes the argument by saying that coins were valuable and appealing for the Norse people so maybe they used it as necklaces and jewelry, which ultimately gave the Norse a trading and bargaining tool to use with the Native Americans even if the native Americans did not necessarily view the coin as currency.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...necessarily view the coin as currency.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18359375 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4455464894 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4692012097 49.2860985944 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293492632506 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111917481655 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09097482288 0.0662205650399 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176637553923 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837707087748 0.0443174109184 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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