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Although the sale of rhinoceros horns is illegal worldwide, rhinoceroses (Rhinos) are commonly poached (hunted illegally) for their horns, which can be sold for tens of thousands of dollars per kilogram. Rhino horns are so valuable that one type of rhino is already extinct because poachers killed too many of them. All rhinos may soon become extinct unless something is done to help save them. Several ideas have been suggested

Both the lecture and passage discuss the extinction of Rhinos. The article states that poachers hunt Rhinos for their horns, and because of that, Rhinos become extinct soon and suggested several ideas to help Rhinos survive. However, the professor claims that these theories have significant weaknesses and refutes each idea.
First, the reading mentions that dehorning Rhinos and removing their horns might be a good idea to make them less attractive for poachers. On the contrary, the professor states that this idea is not practical nor a good idea for the survival of Rhinos. It wants too much time and money. Also, the Rhinos use horns to dig water, break branches when they are looking for food, protect their young's, and protect their territory. So, horning has disadvantages in the wild.
Second, the article claims that educating consumers about keratin in horns' has no known health value, could significantly decrease the demand for rhino horns. However, the professor mentions that horns have healing power, which is long-lasting, and poachers have had this idea from their ancient times for thousands of years. So it is very strong beliefs, and educating poachers can not impact them, and they can not change their minds about that.
Finally, the reading states that if governments started selling cheap rhino horns, rhino poaching would no longer be profitable and would probably stop. The professor refutes this idea by maintaining that most people may not buy horns. Still, when the government started selling it cheaply, they made it acceptable, and demand for horns grew dramatically, producing a large market. Also, the poachers continue to hunt Rhinos because of these large markets.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, as to, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23357664234 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44244309344 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9599296503 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315179166593 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103429604577 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782252315205 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201046355118 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377108237339 0.0443174109184 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, as to, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments