Asteroids.
Nowadays people are concerned about how to make profits and could go much farthest place even an asteroid to attain it. The reading is about the idea that settlement of people on asteroids because it is very convenient and much profitable than any other planet. How ever, the lecturer challenges the claims made by the author and elucidates in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, the reading states that the asteroids have low gravity which makes it easier to land, take off, and need less fuel for the return trip to earth. On the other hand, the professor claims that though it makes it easier to land and take off it is not a practical idea because people have to face certain risks being there on asteroids. For instance, due to low gravity, people will lose muscle mass and bone density and have to challenge many health-related complications. For this purpose, the lecturer thinks it is not a good idea.
Furthermore, the author says that as asteroids are rich in mining valuable metals they could make more profit when they sell them on the earth. On the contrary, the lecturer conveys that even though the asteroid colony supply with valuable metals to the earth there is no guarantee that they could make more money on the earth by selling them. Additionally, he states that when there is much availability of metals in the market they could sell at a lower price. This is why the lecturer thinks they cannot make many profits.
Finally, from the author's point of view, the asteroids are easy to colonize, and also it would be more affordable to get in those asteroids as they come closer to the earth. However, the man in the lecture explains that though the asteroids come close to the earth it doesn't stay close to it but travels far from the earth may be away from the mars too.he also mentions that it could be a challenging situation for people and not that easy to return from. This is how he mentions this unusual activity of asteroids which is unpredictable.
To sum up, asteroids are not good for health, we cannot predict the profit and also it's not easy to return back to the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
... much profitable than any other planet. How ever, the lecturer challenges the claims mad...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...he asteroids come close to the earth it doesnt stay close to it but travels far from t...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ict the profit and also its not easy to return back to the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, may, so, for instance, first of all, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 374.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66310160428 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43420674223 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473262032086 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.893675005 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275989012156 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109467042405 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990426705235 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17202889384 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693379027704 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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