Asteroids colonization
The reading passage and the lecture both explore whether people can colonize asteroids. The writer suggests that this could be the best alternative, and several reasons are given in support of this statement. As reasonable as these points seem, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on them, finding them impractical for the following reasons.
To begin with, the author states that the gravity of asteroids which is much lower than planets can bring advantages for the landing of spaceships. For example, not only can the landing be safer, but spaceships can carry more equipment as well. Conversely, disputing the passage’s argument, she notes that the low gravity of asteroids can pose negative impacts on spacemen's health, causing them to lose muscle mass and reduce their bone density. As a result, the lecturer believes that it won't be suitable for people to colonize asteroids in long term.
Second, even though the author proposes that there are valuable materials on asteroids that bring extreme profits and can offset the cost of sending them back to earth, the lecturer argues that it is a misconception. This is because the price to support the colonization of asteroids and the transportation of the material probably will end up outweighing the profits of materials. Furthermore, in an attempt to establish a more concrete explanation, the lecturer points out that the more material that is supplied from asteroids, the more the price on earth will decrease. Therefore, the lecturer disagrees with the author.
Last but not least, the lecturer acutely identifies a weakness in the passage that people can readily access asteroids since they’re closer to earth. She details that spacemen may have difficulty returning to earth from asteroids since the orbits of asteroids are casual, which have a chance to move far away from earth. Accordingly, the lecturer contradicts the article that asteroids are easy to reach.
To summarize, both the author and the lecturer hold conflicting views about whether colonization on asteroids will be the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: THEYRE_THEIR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their'?
Suggestion: their
...ople can readily access asteroids since they’re closer to earth. She details that space...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, conversely, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75738803478 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.768208277 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304030630513 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111425793254 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101555647882 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181467579724 0.162205337803 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693105174245 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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