Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
This statement is fundamentally correct; people now days are less happier than the before; some of the people think that the people in the current time is happy that the before, but I think it is not sufficient for the happiness. Therefore, I fundamentally agree with the statement and I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspect.
The chief reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that human are social creature and we need to spend most of our spare times with our friends and families. However, most of us shoulder lots of the responsivities and we just use our cellphones to make connect with each other in other word we are alone most of the time and never find anyone to speak with.
The latter reason why I generally disagree with the statement is turn to our lifestyles. All of us have a stressful life, and have lots of struggle to solve, so we cannot find free time to go to a village and use it fresh air and relax. For example, my parent work hard during the week and we just have in in the new year celebrities to go to out of the cities and the smooth blue sky.
Last but not the least, most of the people use social media i.e. Instagram and son on to show how they have serendipity life style. In other word, we life just in the surface. We didn't feel good, but instead of getting help to try to show us in imagination life. On other hand, since we have this like of view to the issues, we never can recognize and understand each other. Admittedly, because most of us have hundreds of friends in social media, it is natural to exactly know how are most of them. Besides, because we spend our free time in front of the them, we lost the opportune to find real friends.
In sum, in my point of view although the new life and quickly changes in the world render us lots of the opportunities, we don't know how to use it and confuse. Based on the reasons I mentioned above I totally agree with the statement and I think that people now a day are less happier then the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less happy'?
Suggestion: less happy
...damentally correct; people now days are less happier than the before; some of the people thi...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... days are less happier than the before; some of the people think that the people in the cur...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of struggles'.
Suggestion: lots of struggles
...l of us have a stressful life, and have lots of struggle to solve, so we cannot find free time t...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...k hard during the week and we just have in in the new year celebrities to go to out o...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...r word, we life just in the surface. We didnt feel good, but instead of getting help ...
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Line 7, column 553, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...ause we spend our free time in front of the them, we lost the opportune to find real fri...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...render us lots of the opportunities, we dont know how to use it and confuse. Based o...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less happy'?
Suggestion: less happy
...t and I think that people now a day are less happier then the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 30.3222958057 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32894736842 5.08290768461 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40442084756 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8407552717 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213922823727 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773621637702 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894941180979 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145716934659 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997628424414 0.0443174109184 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 12.2367328918 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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