Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There have always been serious discussions about the optimal working days in a week.As a matter of fact, Many distinct combinations have been experimented in various countries throughout recent decades. However, there seems to be no definitive answer to the question that how many days one should go to work. In my view, given a choice between working three days a week for longer hours and five days a week with shorter hours, the former seems more promising. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, as a result of it, one would have two extra days as holidays. This added time can be used for a variety of activities. Spending more time with your beloved family, going to 3-4 days vacations on a more regular basis are among some benefits of such a system. In addition, because of such continuous leisure, people would start their next week with increasing energy. My uncle's situation is a good example of this. He is a fireman in the central fire department in Tehran, the capital city of my country. Since they are required to stay on station for three consecutive days, while being ready for any possible mission whenever it may occur, they shall be at home for rest of the week. He gets to go to his beautiful villa in the countryside every weekend, enjoying the sublime weather with his loved ones.
Secondly, the hours that an individual may get home sooner in a 5-days working condition, are not of any particularly good use. To be more specific, at evening or late afternoon most of the recreational resorts, shopping centers or other public places worth going to with your family, are either extremely crowded or closed. Moreover, due to numerous activities that people are involved in on their free time after work, it might be difficult to get together or truly feel relaxed. For instance, when I arrive home after a long day in university, I barely find anyone or anything worthwhile to spend time with. Basically, Everyone has something to do while I am too exhausted for even the most amusing things imaginable. During that period, My Brother goes to his basketball class, my mother is busy doing housework and friends are as tired as me. Consequently, I am confined to options like lying down on the sofa surfing the internet, playing video games or in the best case scenario watching a movie.
In conclusion, I hold the view that it is more enjoyable to able to be occupied with your job for just 3 days as opposed to the normal 5 days. Not only do longer holidays invigorate you, but also useless time wasted on unimportant matters would be utilised in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 30.3222958057 228% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1373.03311258 160% => OK
No of words: 466.0 270.72406181 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7017167382 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57732111563 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 145.348785872 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603004291845 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 419.366225166 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6306297338 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09523809524 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33652225401 0.272083759551 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834834177379 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724025050047 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200357238827 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717237515173 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 63.6247240618 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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