Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The educational system of each country have a series of policy which echoes its academic status. There have been mixed reactions to teachers wages rate, and many academic people think that it is not a good way to improve knowledge level by allocation teachers salaries based on how much their students learn. I tend to agree with the idea that teachers’ income must be a reflect of his students learning. Following lines further describe my view about teachers salary and students learning.
The first and foremost reason is that this can make teachers work harder. If teachers undrestand that their salary will be paid based on their performance in the class, which is the result of students learning, they tend to work harder and do their best to have a better income. My father’s story is an interesting example in this case. He is a teacher in elementary school, and teaches to third grade students. Untill 10 years ago our county’s educational system did not devide teachers based on payments. But after that a law was enacted which classified teachers based on an annual evaluation, and the better the teacher the more money he receives. After that my father started to read lots of sources about how to teach kids more effeciently and after 5 years our income were doubled. His students were all among top students of the school. As can be seen this was a practical rule which benefited both students and teachers.
The secon reason that should be taken inro account is it that teachers try to motivate students to study more and more. This can lead to students improvemnts and consequently teachers economic advantage. My experience is a compelling example. In the same year that I pointed out above, My teachers was also affected by the law. He tried to promote us to study more and also checked our assignments. He awarded us if we were good in the class. He bought many gifts for my classmates and that year our class had a great development.
According to the reasons mentioned above, teachers should be paid based on their performance in the class which means students improvement. That is because in this way they work harder to learn new methods and also they tend to motivate their students to learn more and more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 387.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82428940568 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62903357383 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503875968992 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4843969302 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8636363636 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04545454545 7.06452816374 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253877429113 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732254667217 0.0996497079465 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696397596723 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172737751856 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548278889533 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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