Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool (early childhood education programs, for example, for three-year-old children) at no costs for children’s families.
Use reasons and examples to support your position.
Today, by improving education systems many people intend to send their kids to the best schools and colleges. Therefore, some governments try to arrange this process which one of them is giving budget to institutes or giving money for tuition to people’s child.one of the important action that is precious which children to attend preschool without any cost for families. There can be no doubt that it’s an appropriate way to help education systems due to the substantial of which are elaborated upon here under.
First, in recent days, with increasing economic problems many people have been worried about keeping whose children’s especially about kids learning. For instance, according to the latest surveys in Washington University, department of economics science, 58% of American people have serious economic problems. Thus, one of crucial concerns is they cannot be able to send their kids to suitable preschool, school or college. On the other hand, Parents might be frustrated or disappointed by lack of unable to paying tuition of their kids. Furthermore, parents perhaps are compelled to implementation of some delinquency actions.
Second, another thing worth mentioning is that, every modern society need to basic education systems such as kindergartens preschools and schools. Accordingly, government should take responsibility about promoting qualities of them. Not only governments have to support education systems but also they should prepare space which kids can be able study freely such preschool so that children prepare themselves as well for bright future. In addition, it can be easily seen parents can consider other aspect of daily life and they cannot compel to think about their learning kids.
Last but not least, without any shadow of doubt, when children go to preschool without any limitation can flourish talent and parents can distinguish ability of their children and of course that if parents find children abilities and talents, parents will improve these items. Therefore, children can be effective in their societies and children will have a great influence on their atmosphere in the future. In other words, governments invest in preschools and schools after some years they can see its results and this result is consisted of prosperity of their countries.
To put it in a nutshell, some governments have policy which pay students cost for preschool level in order that both kids and parents use this opportunity and finally they can be able influence on their society for it is mentioned above. All in all, I converge on this policy and I strongly believe that all administrations should follow the policy.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'another thing', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'of course', 'such as', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277894736842 0.261695866417 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.143157894737 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694736842105 0.0723426182421 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0435111971325 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505263157895 0.0277247811725 182% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122105263158 0.128828473217 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0378947368421 0.0370669169778 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83737741839 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0378947368421 0.0208969081088 181% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631578947368 0.128158765124 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0357894736842 0.0158828679856 225% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168421052632 0.0114777025283 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2705.0 1645.83664459 164% => OK
No of words: 421.0 271.125827815 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42517814727 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.04852973271 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.418052256532 0.374372842146 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320665083135 0.287516216867 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223277909739 0.187439937562 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163895486936 0.113142543107 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83737741839 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 145.348785872 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548693586698 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.8075112591 53.8517498576 118% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0529801325 130% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7647058824 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3012165909 49.3711431718 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.117647059 132.220823453 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 21.7502111507 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.17647058824 0.878197800319 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.39072847682 206% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.8312141959 50.5018328374 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.87387387387 1.90840788429 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23704594957 0.549887131256 43% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119397409684 0.142949733639 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715764269562 0.0787303798458 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553162766919 0.631733273073 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136562909231 0.139662658121 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871039056938 0.266732575781 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590401217199 0.103435571967 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305121493129 0.414875509568 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0469429172511 0.0530846634433 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156833781189 0.40443939384 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416449881002 0.0528353158467 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.2958057395 49% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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