Doubts among scholars about the accuracy of the Chevalier’s memories.
The article talks about the existence of serious doubts among scholars about the accuracy of the chevalier’s memories. they affirm that may situations were invented to make the memories more appealing. The lecturer has a counter opinion, she states that not only is a precise historical source, but also is quite reliable one. Furthermore, she refutes each reason given in the test, casting doubts in the author’s beliefs.
Firstly, the lecture state that he lived in Switzerland and spend a lot of money in parties and gambling, but it is confirmed by evidency that he borrow high sum of money to Swiss merchants. however, the orator disproves this point saying that it do not mean that was a insolvent person, but that the money gained with the goods that he has sold, delay some time to arrive and he needed the money. Notwithstanding, the money was come back to those friends.
Secondly, the test affirm that even when it is know that the conversations with Voltaire truly happened, it is impossible that the memories were accurency about it, because they occurred many years before that the test were written. Nonetheless, the professor contradicts this point noticing that chevalier took notes inmediately after each conversation happened and kept it with him for years. Moreover, there are people that affirm to see chevalier consilting his notes and other sources continuosly during the writing of his memories.
Finally, the writer remarks that the history of the venice prision break is little credible, and it is more likely that he has been an invention to make the narrative more atractive. however, the lecture deaftly point out the waekness of this point by saying that the best evidency come from document of the govern of venice of that time. they prove that the cealing of room was repaired inmediately after the chevalier escape, remarking the convincing of this point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 314.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09554140127 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69910423999 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9157297739 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209456967069 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823008541584 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191262236667 0.0662205650399 289% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129259569037 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160590572264 0.0443174109184 362% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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