The reading is discussing the advantages of Earthworms and provides three example to illustrate this point. However the professor cast doubt that the Earthworms only have a negative effect on the ecosystem, and she refutes each of the author’s points.
First, the reading claims that Earthworms have a beneficial effect on the physical and chemical properties of soils. On the other hand the professor refutes this point by stating that earthworms cause damage and destroy soil cover. She added that her friend is a specialist scientist when she perform an experiment she found that the thick layer of sponge near the shore, where people use to discard the unused Earthworm for fishing, was disappeared. Later she found that after digging the soil a large number of Earthworms were the cause of the sponge disappeared.
Second, the article claims that Earthworms benefit plants in every conceivable way. The professor thinks the opposite is true. She states that Earthworm consider as a threat to wild flowers. As the Earthworm taking organic material down by digging the surface that led to the disappearing of wild flower. As the former depend on the duff as a nutrition source.
Third, the reading averse that Earthworms are important link in food web because they form a food source for a numerous species of animals. The lecture opposes this point by saying that the duff that the Earthworm taking down the soil consider as a natural habitat for a lot of animals as spiders. Thus the Earthworms has a negative effect on the ecosystem.
However the professor cast doubt that the Earthworms only have a negative effect on the ecosystem,
However the professor believe that the Earthworms only have a negative effect on the ecosystem,
when she perform an experiment
when she performs an experiment
where people use to discard
where people used to discard
were the cause of the sponge disappeared.
were the cause of the sponge that disappeared.
were the cause of the sponge disappearing.
Earthworm consider as a threat to wild flowers
Earthworms are considered as a threat to wild flowers
As the Earthworm taking organic material down by digging the surface that led to the disappearing of wild flower.
As the Earthworms are taking organic materials down by digging the surface that led to the disappearing of wild flower.
Earthworms are important link in food web
Earthworms are important links in food web
Earthworms are an important link in food web
the duff that the Earthworm taking down the soil consider as a natural habitat for a lot of animals as spiders.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 257 250
No. of Characters: 1260 1200
No. of Different Words: 136 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.004 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.903 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.56 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.934 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
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