Elephants' behaviors
The reading and the lecture are both about interesting elephant behaviors. The author of the text feels that interest in elephants revealed amazing behaviors of theirs. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. She firmly believes that the ideas presented in the passage are skeptical.
To begin with, the author claims that elephants always know when they die and leave their flock and go near the water at this time. It is said that most bones of elephants had been found near the place called "elephant graveyards." This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She mentions that elephants leave their herd to find food for eating because they are not having normal teeth when they get older. Additionally, she says that elder elephants go near the water because they can eat softer vegetation.
Secondly, the writer suggests that elephants can draw pictures and hold paintbrushes because they have artistic skills. Moreover, some elephants might have been known to paint images that showed noticeable things, such as flowers. The lecturer, however, refutes this by mentioning that a trainer always pushes elephants' air when they try to draw something because they are sensitive. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that elephants only can paint lines and do not know what they are.
Finally, the author posits that elephants have a fear of mice and some scientists proved it. It is stated that they do not scare of dangerous animals in which elephants regularly share an environment. In contrast, the lecturer says that elephants are unfamiliar with mice, so elephants fear them. She notes that it is an instinct on them and where mice are common to them, they are not having problems.
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...resented in the passage are skeptical. To begin with, the author claims that el...
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...cause they can eat softer vegetation. Secondly, the writer suggests that eleph...
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...t lines and do not know what they are. Finally, the author posits that elephant...
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...o them, they are not having problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62539686332 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4542232635 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.75 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342805001546 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119766789398 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877046722233 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205624268328 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328929366397 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.