Employees of businesses should be hired for their entire lives when they get jobs. Agree or disagree.
Everybody have a work in order to survive to era of cut through competitions. There are two broad options are available businesses and job. Take 5 m’s very important to survive in the business which are men, money, material, method, and machine, out of this men is important. In the businesses lot of proposition and works are done for the recruitment and hired. Lot of decision are taken of the business men then time duration’s salary and so on. They hired the entire life or temporary job. I agree with the statement that "Employees of businesses should be hired for their entire lives when they get jobs".
Firstly, employees gets the job is most requirement of the business. The secured feelings are important part for employees and it is provided security employees. The company gets the satisfaction from the work they are provided a more benefit to a employees. For an example, My uncle give their hard work for their company then their company achieve a high profit and also increase salary then they feel secured for their jobs.
Furthermore, employees hired for every year that company have to cut the profit because of they spend lot of money in train to the employee and spend lot of time for them. However, in business hired entire life then they don’t west time and as well as don’t west businesses money. The time and money saved can always be useful for the employees. For an example, government school hired teacher for entire lives so they not hired every time new teacher in school. It’s benefit for a government.
Moreover, businesses are hired a entire live then they have a lot of experience peoples. They benefit of the business work. it’s also provide a family environment and a good relationship for all living power of company. For an example, my father work in Infotech company since 25 years. He has a good relationship with all employees and they feel like a family.
In a nutshell, employees should fell secure and business should save time and money. I agree with the statement that "Employees of businesses should be hired for their entire lives when they get jobs".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
Everybody have a work in order to survive to era of cu...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., material, method, and machine, out of this men is important. In the businesses lot...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...e, out of this men is important. In the businesses lot of proposition and works are done f...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ork they are provided a more benefit to a employees. For an example, My uncle giv...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: a employee; employees
...ork they are provided a more benefit to a employees. For an example, My uncle give their ha...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ear that company have to cut the profit because of they spend lot of money in train to the empl...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...est time and as well as don't west businesses money. The time and money saved can alw...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...les. They benefit of the business work. it's also provide a family environment and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95054945055 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77252660142 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43956043956 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4458320902 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.347826087 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8260869565 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504556911104 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158287287876 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153258313366 0.0662205650399 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336127478814 0.162205337803 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123081992366 0.0443174109184 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.42419426049 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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