Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass windows. There are, however, several solutions that responsible businesses can use to prevent injuries to birds.
The article states that the glasses using in the structure are so dangerous to flighting birds and millions of birds are harmed every year, for they are trying to pass it through, and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor explains that the none of the solutions are well effectively avoids the birds harming, and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that provide one-way glass that is transparent in merely one surface, thereby understanding a solid barrier from birds. The professor refutes this points by stating that the one-way glass leads to the glass looks like a mirror; whereby, the birds recognize the glass reflection as a tree or sky; therefore, they flight through them, and they are injured.
Second, the article claims that the architectures can use the painted pattern on glass to avoid the birds crashing. however the professor contends the birds perceive this pattern, and the hole thereof as a open hole; Hence they try to scape through this extremely small hole. in additionally, the dark inside of the house due to this painting makes people to boring.
Third, the reading avers that the structure in a birds flight way can be equipped with magnetic machine that emit magnetic signal that prevent the birds from accident with buildings. the professor opposes this point by declaring that the birds not only use the bright light, their eyes to navigate in the short distance, but use they the magnetic compass to navigate in very long distance; it will have not much effective approach.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...n on glass to avoid the birds crashing. however the professor contends the birds percei...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...n on glass to avoid the birds crashing. however the professor contends the birds percei...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e this pattern, and the hole thereof as a open hole; Hence they try to scape thro...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...cape through this extremely small hole. in additionally, the dark inside of the ho...
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Line 8, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the birds from accident with buildings. the professor opposes this point by declari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, look, second, so, therefore, third, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04247104247 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44709681506 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.859282994 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310198098694 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125093471242 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1181405894 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191445843432 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884854950412 0.0443174109184 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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