Globalization
Globalization is often seen has a contentious topic due to the advantages and disadvantages it provides to the world.
Even thought undeniably, globalization has made commercial relationships easier than ever before, it also has some downsides to this integration. First, there are dangers in relying on a global economy because problems in one region can effect other regions too. For example, the 2008 financial crisis was generated in the US but the results of it were visible all over Europe and other countries.
Second, the low cost of living offered by developing countries has consequently made workers in developed zones loose their jobs. In the USA, TVs production was not as cheap as in Mexico, so when the fabricants of television moved abroad, thousands of families were left without incomes.
Finally, there are not really environmental benefits when it comes to the rise of capitalism, since companies keep producing more and more cheap goods and exporting them without any regulations, being harmful to the ecosystem.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. 60
- TOEFL Independant 3
- Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why? 83
- TOEFL integrated writing: Altruism. 3
- Rococo Art 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...quently made workers in developed zones loose their jobs. In the USA, TVs production ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, really, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 1373.03311258 64% => OK
No of words: 165.0 270.72406181 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99576683279 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.540411800872 135% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2449156849 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06452816374 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184013351945 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845916707164 0.0996497079465 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988932189036 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107990651299 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108495635568 0.0443174109184 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.42419426049 125% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.