Integrated- group work
The passage explains how group work can promote the decision making process. However, the lecturer mentions some disadvantages of such practice which cast doubt on the claims of the reading.
Firstly, the professor argues that people tend to conform to the ideas of the majority in a group. Thus, groups usually ignore any contradicting view. This is against the passage claim that working together in accomplishing a task leads to the pooling of intellectual resources and a more varied and deeper view toward a problem.
Secondly, the lecturer highlights the false believe of being immune from making mistakes among groups. He illustrates his point by a case of prison break due to the fact that none of the responsible agents could believe that a single prisoner would deceive them. This is in contrast to the passage that says sharing the responsibility of making decision, to reduce the risk of making wrong decision, is a benefit of group work.
Finally, he asserts that group members usually reassure each other about their decisions so that they may stick to a wrong idea. The Ford company failure in making a best seller product is an example of this type of mall-efficiency. This undermines the reading that says a benefit of group work is brainstorming, which results in achieving worthwhile goals.
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the lecturer highlights the false believe
the lecturer highlights the false belief
Sentence: The Ford company failure in making a best seller product is an example of this type of mall-efficiency.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 217 250
No. of Characters: 1071 1200
No. of Different Words: 131 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.935 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.716 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.982 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.601 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4