International trade
The article introduces the topic of transportation used in the international trades, and about their advancement. The author states that many countries are now using autonomous containers which are without crew and is used for transportation of goods. The writer says that, there are many advantages of the crewless container over to crewed container. However, Lecturer opposes the statement of the author and attacks on each advantage that is made in reading section.
Firstly, the author says that crewless cargo ships would reduce the cost for shipping companies. As, the ships has to pay for the human crew; on top of salaries, they have to be provided with food, sleeping quarters, climate control etc. But lecturer believes that there are flaws in the authors opinion and states that crew does not increase the cost of companies but save the money for company. The cargos has to travel for long period of time during their voyage to destination. During such long period of time the many parts and equipment’s of the cargo requires repairment. Such repairment are made by human crew and made the cargo to reach destination. So, If human crew would not be available such repairment during journey would not be possible and then only it may increase the cost.
Secondly, The writer says that the crewless ship can also be less attractive to pirates. Pirates usually earn money from travelling cargo by ransoming the crew members of the ship rather that stealing the containers and their equipment. But the lecturer criticize this view of author and tells that in present time there are many high tech pirates who can easily destroy the GPS system of crewless cargo and can contort them to any direction they want . This also without going to the ship and just by sitting on a far Computer. Lecturer further adds that such crewless cargo can be boon for the pirates.
On coming to third point, Author states that crewless ships would be less likely to get accident. And he further adds that most of the accidents in ships occurs mainly due to the human error and due to indolent nature of the crew. He says that crew members reacts slowly to the problems and lead ship to accident. Furthers, He says that crewless ship can use sensor and computers to detect the obstacles and can avoid accident. But, Lecturer rebuts this view and says that computers can only think logically but if the instant problem will arise than human can deal it more sensibly than computer. Lecturer further adds that during the long course of ship there might occur such circumstances where the human can deal better than computer.
Coming to end, As we can see author and lecturer holds very different opinion on use of crewed or crewless container.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd is used for transportation of goods. The writer says that, there are many advant...
^^^
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...er believes that there are flaws in the authors opinion and states that crew does not i...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... save the money for company. The cargos has to travel for long period of time durin...
^^^
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pany. The cargos has to travel for long period of time during their voyage to destination. Dur...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...voyage to destination. During such long period of time the many parts and equipment’s of the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... contort them to any direction they want . This also without going to the ship and...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1373.03311258 165% => OK
No of words: 466.0 270.72406181 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87553648069 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45340083509 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457081545064 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 419.366225166 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1579783626 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7826086957 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2608695652 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0122952750445 0.272083759551 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00581674317158 0.0996497079465 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272829438428 0.0662205650399 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0103522317222 0.162205337803 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207044634444 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd is used for transportation of goods. The writer says that, there are many advant...
^^^
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...er believes that there are flaws in the authors opinion and states that crew does not i...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... save the money for company. The cargos has to travel for long period of time durin...
^^^
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pany. The cargos has to travel for long period of time during their voyage to destination. Dur...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...voyage to destination. During such long period of time the many parts and equipment’s of the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... contort them to any direction they want . This also without going to the ship and...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1373.03311258 165% => OK
No of words: 466.0 270.72406181 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87553648069 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45340083509 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457081545064 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 419.366225166 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1579783626 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7826086957 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2608695652 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0122952750445 0.272083759551 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00581674317158 0.0996497079465 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272829438428 0.0662205650399 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0103522317222 0.162205337803 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207044634444 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.