Issues un encyclopedia

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Issues un encyclopedia

Reading paragraphs defines several issues in online encyclopedias which makes the informations less valuable. However, the lecture supported the online encyclopedias and disputes the reasons made in article.
First, according to reading ,online format have many mistakes due to freedom that anyone can edit the information while printed format is prepared by mainly experts. This special point is cast doubt by lecture by saying that it is easy to make change in online encyclopedia if someone got any mistakes but in printed version one’s can make these types of changes.
Seconly, auther posits that some hackers can easly eccess the whole information and can delete or corrupt data easly.In contrast professor says these hackers can’t easily steal the information because there are special editors in online encyclopedia which notices and fix it in vesy soon and realiably.

Finally, article tend to say online encyclopedia focus on topic in too much depth which led to decide which one is important and which one is ignorable. The lectuer favor online data by saying in online format there is not issue regarding space so it try to provide accurate and detailed information and it reflects exactly the reader interest.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Reading paragraphs defines several issues in online encycl...
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...ading paragraphs defines several issues in online encyclopedias which makes the ...
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...the informations less valuable. However, the lecture supported the online encyclo...
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...n article. First, according to reading ,online format have many mistakes due to...
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...e. First, according to reading ,online format have many mistakes due to freedom...
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...point is cast doubt by lecture by saying that it is easy to make change in online...
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...n make these types of changes. Seconly, auther posits that some hackers can eas...
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...f changes. Seconly, auther posits that some hackers can easly eccess the whole ...
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...on and can delete or corrupt data easly.In contrast professor says these hackers ...
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...pt data easly.In contrast professor says these hackers can’t easily steal the inf...
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...e special editors in online encyclopedia which notices and fix it in vesy soon an...
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...le tend to say online encyclopedia focus on topic in too much depth which led to...
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...us on topic in too much depth which led to decide which one is important and whi...
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... by saying in online format there is not issue regarding space so it try to prov...
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...rmat there is not issue regarding space so it try to provide accurate and detail...
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...re is not issue regarding space so it try to provide accurate and detailed inform...
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...rovide accurate and detailed information and it reflects exactly the reader inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63439271742 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6052376723 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 110.228320801 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06452816374 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141720886527 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807659502915 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624996340141 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103022690151 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073759901214 0.0443174109184 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.3589403974 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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