This passage talks about a solution called Turtle Escape Devices(TED) in order to save turtles who are accidentally trapped into the net and die because could not rise to the surface to breathe. The writer criticized this kind of method in three aspects. But the speaker indicates that TEDs are still an effective way to protect turtles and rebut the writer's ideas.
First, the author proposes that it is rare for turtles to be captured by shrimper. However, the lecture pointed out that only in the country of United states,there are thousands of shrimpers wandering on the sea. Such number could not called rarely. In addition, turtles have already been endangered animals and their population is small now. So the accident catching can still cause serious result.
Second, the passage says alternative way could shorten the time to keep the turtle in traps alive. The speaker rebuts that this idea is just in theory, there is no evidence that government has the capacity to supervise all shrimper ships which are dispersedly located on the vase ocean. So this approach is proved hard to enforce.
Third, the author demonstrated that current TEDs are too small for some large turtle species to escape. The speaker restored this notion and proposed that is easy for us to modify the design of TEDs. Larger TEDs can be used in areas where big turtles settled. Therefore, the writer's last idea is proved unconvincing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...hat only in the country of United states,there are thousands of shrimpers wandering on...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'call'
Suggestion: call
...ering on the sea. Such number could not called rarely. In addition, turtles have alrea...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tching can still cause serious result. Second, the passage says alternative way...
^^^
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence that government has the capacity to supervise all shrimper ships which are d...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, third, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46396241799 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63025210084 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8970701514 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166300009003 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467537445215 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545636157842 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949503728526 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446385161945 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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