in the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future? agree or disagree?

Essay topics: in the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future? agree or disagree?

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Recently, the concept of successful careers has been brought to public attention. Some people believe that identifying a secure career was more effortless in the past; however, there s is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in this belief. From a personal perspective, detecting a secure and prosperous job is far more accessible today that it was in the past, given that people today are more experienced, educated, and skilled. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, since the beginning of the current century, the world has seen plenty of technological inventions, the most significant one is the internet. Apparently, people today rely on the internet, which opens the door to a wealth of information, and makes them more experience. A recent survey conducted by the University of Toronto found people before starting a career, they use the internet to collect valid information about it, which improves their ability to take an optimal decision. Consequently, the internet could ensure people’s success in their jobs.   
Next, couple with the technological invention, proper education is another reason why people today are thriving. Recently, the education system has been improved drastically; given that schools today use open discussion classrooms, which help students to explore topics, integrate information, and be more independent. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, schools in Canada teach students by ideas and concepts instead of facts, which enhance students’ brain functions and maximize the potential learning outcomes. Provided that students get a quality education, they could not only broaden their knowledge; but also, enhance their personality. Therefore, a better education system today has a positive impact on adults’ professional livelihood.
Finally, although the previous points are the first ones that cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that should be born in mind. Adults today are more responsible than before. For example, in developed countries, such as The United States, and Canada students start to work at young ages; furthermore, they take loans from banks to apply for colleges. To put it in another way, they work to earn money for their tuition fees and other college-related costs. Although taking loans put them under deep pressure, it helps them to be more responsible. Therefore, involving in practical life early, helps adults to choose a suitable successful career in the future.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, people today can identify their secure careers in the future than they were in the past. It is suggested that schools design learning activities that help students to detect their careers in the future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 1373.03311258 177% => OK
No of words: 453.0 270.72406181 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36203090508 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88494537451 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 145.348785872 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567328918322 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 419.366225166 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6345776114 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.409090909 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10840539789 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323856668271 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465538142483 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723881975298 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058060000541 0.0443174109184 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 63.6247240618 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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