Both lecture and article discuss about effect of reducing workweek to 4 days from 5 days.
Lecture challenges the benefit mentioned in the article about reducing one working day and increasing working hours by 2
for remaining days.
First off, lecture argues point mentioned in article about reducing one work day would benefit employee and business.
He says that employee will save $15 per day on gas and in all employee would save $850 per year but this come at the cost of
no business for one day. Which he thinks is not justifying reason.
Secondly, lecture also refute article statement about reducing one work day would reduce business cost. He thinks that adding 2 hours each day
is not equal to one working day effort. Since most of the time, extra 2 hours will be added during evening time and consumers are
gone by that time, which brings no business. Ultimately this will reduce business by 20%.
Finally, lecture contradict the point made in article about reducing work days will help employee to give time
for family. Lecture points out that, employee had to find daycare for young kids which operate 10 hours a day, this itself is very exhausting job. Moreover, if employee have older kids anyway they will spend half of day in school and will only get remaining half with parent.
With all points made in lecture, he disagrees with idea about reducing one work day will benefit both employee and business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng day and increasing working hours by 2 for remaining days. First off, lectur...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t the cost of no business for one day. Which he thinks is not justifying reason. ...
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Line 10, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed during evening time and consumers are gone by that time, which brings no busin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293680297398 0.261695866417 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.17843866171 0.158904122519 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0297397769517 0.0723426182421 41% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0334572490706 0.0435111971325 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0223048327138 0.0277247811725 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144981412639 0.128828473217 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0706319702602 0.0370669169778 191% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.24092532562 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148698884758 0.0208969081088 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00371747211896 0.00154638098197 240% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631970260223 0.128158765124 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0371747211896 0.0158828679856 234% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00743494423792 0.0114777025283 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1436.0 1645.83664459 87% => OK
No of words: 246.0 271.125827815 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83739837398 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04852973271 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313008130081 0.374372842146 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252032520325 0.287516216867 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150406504065 0.187439937562 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0731707317073 0.113142543107 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24092532562 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.539623497131 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.0011461354 53.8517498576 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9230769231 21.7502111507 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8557678653 49.3711431718 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 132.220823453 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 21.7502111507 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.878197800319 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.09492273731 269% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 44.1263289556 50.5018328374 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.1746031746 1.90840788429 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233474605403 0.549887131256 42% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127174529523 0.142949733639 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.095858874641 0.0787303798458 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.730381178598 0.631733273073 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.235929488451 0.139662658121 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100792060547 0.266732575781 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518058958791 0.103435571967 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.145908917261 0.414875509568 35% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.084294147894 0.0530846634433 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11225833443 0.40443939384 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453586668067 0.0528353158467 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Not in a correct format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%) but more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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