The reading and listening are about the cons. and pros. of the uses of TED(turtle excluder device) which is invented to give a passage for turtles to escape.The lecturer disagree with the points suggested by the author which criticized the TED for many reasons.
Firstly, the author posits that trapping of turtle is infrequent but losing of shrimps make a loss in their budget.However the lecturer disagree with the author's points by saying that not seldom, but annually thousand of turtle trapped in nets of TED.
Additionally,the author suggested that turtles can be endangered by putting a time limit on shrimp boats to keep their nets underwater.The professor rebuts this arguments.He says that theoretically it is good but practically it is hard to enforce time monitoring in all kind of boats.However,checking of nets by shrimpers before leaving can be more effective then monitoring
Last but not least,the author notes that TED is not work for large species of turtle like loggerhead and leather-back. But the professor claims that there are flows in this arguments.He suggest that it is true that it's not work for larger species of turtle but TED can be easily modified without effective it's functions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of shrimps make a loss in their budget.However the lecturer disagree with the authors ...
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...rs before leaving can be more effective then monitoring Last but not least,the au...
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...ve then monitoring Last but not least,the author notes that TED is not work for l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12207826889 2.5805825403 121% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 21.2450331126 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.604767338 49.2860985944 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.4 110.228320801 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6 21.698381199 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195009618205 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103625427635 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665125122884 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122615375625 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812996146623 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.3589403974 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 53.8541721854 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.498013245 168% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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