In everyday life, we observe many phenomena related to science, bio and many things with art. somehow all these things are related to our study life. we gain knowledge about how things happens, how phenomena take place, how day and night changes, how reproduction take place and how beautifully art uses in our daily life. the knowledge for all these, we learnt in our school time or college life. People read a number of subject in their school or college life. It is my firm of believe that it's better to have a broad knowledge of many subject instead of one specific subject. Few of my reason I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, from the childhood people have to read all the subjects instead of one subject. During their school time, they read about science, bio, social science, math, sports or art. We can easily recognized the phenomena occur in our daily life as all are the basic one. Daily life involve all the phenomena related to science bio art and commerce. So it's good to have knowledge of all subjects. One subject specialization make you perfect only in one way. It can bind your mind up to a fix limit of knowledge of one thing. According to a survey a person mind have a capability to catch more different things at a single time. So knowledge of one subject can make a person less smart.
Additionally, specialization in one subject give you knowledge of a single particular area. In modern days, where people are advance in science as well as in business/art, make more progress in their life instead of the people who have knowledge of only one subject. It's true that specialization in one subject make you perfect in that field. But as today generation is more advance a person should be all rounder. According to recent survey, people who had a great knowledge in science also had a great background in art. It's normal to have two three skills at a time. My statement is more clear by taking example of "Manushi Chiller" who became Miss world in 2017. With the modeling skills, she has a great background in medical institution. She is the best example of Beauty with Brain. So it's good to have knowledge of different subject instead of specialization in one.
In conclusion, I retreat my opinion by saying that knowledge of many subject is much better then specialization in one. In the light of above a person with different subject knowledge, is more successful then the specialized one. Specialization is good but having basic knowledge of all subject make a person mind more creative and more Sharpe. Morever If we are talking about India's educational system, for all the competitive exams you need to know all basic knowledge of all academic subjects. So its better to have broad knowledge of many subjects instead of specialization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, talking about, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79296066253 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78194005079 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414078674948 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8823463164 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6774193548 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5806451613 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35483870968 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365718176958 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118137670689 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11511656135 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255908739883 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676920598143 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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