Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology becoming more advance day by day.With the developing techniques, people also getting more wiser more multitasking.Instead of one talent, Nowadays people are showing their skills in more then one field. Like doing their jobs they also good at cooking, with the knowledge of science people also good at arts and with math they also doing good in management. But it is my firm of belief that doing multitasking work at a single time making people more unperfected. I think this way for several reasons and I'll develop few of them in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with,people who used to do different things, probably may not give their hundred percent. A person mind always have criticized that in a single time brain can focus on few things. Doing so many things, divert the capacity of mind to focus on something. According to a servery, people who do reading or writing with listening music, need to revise their stuff later because during listening music they were not able to give their hundred percent on study.They also sing song when they try to memorize something during study.This make them to remember that thing for some time. So doing more things always left a mark of imperfection.
Additionally,practice makes a thing perfect.And practice always takes time.If people concentrate on something and spend time on that one thing they will surely get perfection. But practice on more thing at a time give unperfection. Things can become more puzzle. So it's good to do one work at a time. I still remember my third class English poem named as "one thing at a time" written by M.A. sood. Few lines from this poem was "All that you do,
,Do with your might;Things done by halves,Are never done right,One thing each time,And that done well,Is a very good rule,As many can tell". This poem suggest us that we should do one thing at one time. Things done by halves are never done right. So i feel that doing so many different things,only few things can be good.
In conclusion I retreat my opinion by saying that perfection can be achieve by walking on one way. Doing different stuff all give you just unperfection. People who loyal about their work achieve perfection. In the light of the above people who busy doing so many things, not able to focus on one thing. Mind diversity can distract their concentration of doing work. Normally people found puzzled who choose to doing different things. Doing different things in a single field help you to clear concept.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, third, well, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89671361502 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75934149446 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504694835681 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.6435708962 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.44 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3912323512 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130662855453 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814830094017 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240014729669 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552442141758 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.