The reading passage and lecturev about attempt to create anew type of broccoli that can be grown on the east coast instead of Califoria broccoli. The reading passage claim three benefits from east coast boroccli. The lucturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She said, coast broccoli does not succesful or beneficial.
First, the writer state that, west coast broccoli has low cost, because it grow in place nearby grocery stores, therefore, it dose not need to transporting from California, so it could sell for less money. This point challenged by lecturer, She says, we can obtain little amount of broccoli by plant it in east coast despite hotter summer, in this case the farmer get small amount of broccoli, therefore they will increase of it coast, therefore, this diminish the benefite of save cost of transportation.
Second, the author argue, the east cost broccole more desirible from people, it grow in traditional breeding dislike genitically modified crops, however it is healthier. The professore rebutts this argument, She mentions, the company which responsible to plant east coast broccoli is the same company that produce a lot of types of genitic modified crops, therefore the customers do not trust this company.
Finally, the author claim that this product healthier because it can be eaten sooner after it is cut has beneficia, because it retain most of nutrients and vitamines. The professor in the other hand stats, there are many types of vegetables have the same nutrient quility like broccoli, such as kally, for this reason, we do not need for breed this type of broccoli.
The reading passage and lecturev about attempt to create anew type of broccoli that can be grown on the east coast instead of Califoria broccoli. The reading passage claim three benefits from east coast boroccli. The lucturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She said, coast broccoli does not succesful or beneficial.
First, the writer state that, west coast broccoli has low cost, because it grow in place nearby grocery stores, therefore, it dose not need to transporting from California, so it could sell for less money. This point challenged by lecturer, She says, we can obtain little amount of broccoli by plant it in east coast despite hotter summer, in this case the farmer get small amount of broccoli, therefore they will increase of it coast, therefore, this diminish the benefite of save cost of transportation.
Second, the author argue, the east cost broccole more desirible from people, it grow in traditional breeding dislike genitically modified crops, however it is healthier. The professore rebutts this argument, She mentions, the company which responsible to plant east coast broccoli is the same company that produce a lot of types of genitic modified crops, therefore the customers do not trust this company.
Finally, the author claim that this product healthier because it can be eaten sooner after it is cut has beneficia, because it retain most of nutrients and vitamines. The professor in the other hand stats, there are many types of vegetables have the same nutrient quility like broccoli, such as kally, for this reason, we do not need for breed this type of broccoli.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The reading passage and lecturev about a...
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...hree benefits from east coast boroccli. The lucturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
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...coli does not succesful or beneficial. First, the writer state that, west coast...
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...coast broccoli has low cost, because it grow in place nearby grocery stores, therefo...
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...ce nearby grocery stores, therefore, it dose not need to transporting from Californi...
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...nefite of save cost of transportation. Second, the author argue, the east cost...
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...on. Second, the author argue, the east cost broccole more desirible fr...
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...e customers do not trust this company. Finally, the author claim that this prod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07169811321 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55827349221 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6790834137 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.4 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4529599017 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215051105753 0.0996497079465 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207376233275 0.0662205650399 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305199265751 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.307385608597 0.0443174109184 694% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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