The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water-what scientists call its salinity-has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfall or rivers. If the trend continues, the lake's water will soon become so salty that the lake will be unable to support fish and bird populations. The lake would then become essentially a dead zone. Fortunately, there are several ways to reverse the trend that is threatening the lake's health.
One option is direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. Water from the lake would be pumped into the facilities and heated. This would cause the water to evaporate into steam, while salt and other materials dissolved in the water would be left behind. The steam would then be cooled down and returned to the lake as salt-free water. Gradually, the high salt levels would be reduced and the lake's overall health would be restored.
Another possible solution is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. Since water in the Pacific Ocean is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake, bringing ocean water into the lake would decrease the lake's salinity. The ocean water could be delivered through pipelines or canals.
Yet another solution would be to control the lake's salinity by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. In the smaller sections, salinity would be allowed to increase. However, in the main and largest section, salinity would be reduced and controlled by, among other things, directing all the freshwater from small rivers in the area to flow into that main section of the lake.
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The article and lecture ,both the are discussing the steady increase in salinity of salton sea in California and several ways to reverse the process of salinity in viseversa.The author notes that it is alarming to bird and fish population since sea cants support them due to high level of salinity
To begin with the author states that here are possible ways against it ,he claims that direct removal of salt from the lake water by special technique like pumbing into desalination facilities and heated and thus can seperate salt content and water. But lecturer challenges his claim by sataing that it sounds unrealistic . On the otherhand it will lead to several enviornmental problems such as dissolution of toxic chemical like selenium which got extract along withsolid salt into the enviornment by breeze.He state that it will cause serious health issues.
Secondly author suggests that diluting high saline water with 20 times less saline Pacific ocean water brings reduce salinity of the Salton sea. On the other hand lecturer possits this argument by stating that government will not able to find resources to construct pipe lines for such a long distance.
Finally author of the article presenting the third idea of constructing walls to divide lakes to several parts with different sizes from small to large sections where salinity will be allowed to increase in smaller sections and in larger sections it will be controlled by several methods .However lecturer rebuts this by mentionng that even a first earthquake can collapse this walls and we cant rely on them at any cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08778625954 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54530292659 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 21.2450331126 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.231404784 49.2860985944 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.166666667 110.228320801 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 21.698381199 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 7.06452816374 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196296720166 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826112625008 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817760934462 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114431878976 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253445551687 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.3589403974 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.8541721854 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.0289183223 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.7273730684 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.498013245 183% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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