Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this modern world of today ,people are found more stressed in there work place than before.Most of the employees are not seemed happy in what they are doing. In this line of thought i personally beleive that if workers assigned different kinds of tasks will be more effective. In my opinion change in routine will defenitely brings more enthusiasam in whatever they are doing. Even if someone doing a work which he used to enjoy will leads to something make them least interested.Life may feel as stagnant which definitely affect the productivity. One of my experience is a best instance of this situation. When i was a dental student i used to work for each departments based on one month rotation. After first week of posting in any particular department make me feel bored and disatisfactory because we keep doing same work in patients. On the other hand when i started to work in a dental clinic ,i was the duty doctor and i was assigned to do all type of procedures daily. I felt more energetic and satisfied by doing the same.

Secondly , doing same type of tasks again and again will not cause any improvement in our experience. The exposure we gain is much limited.If we need experience in our proffesion we should incorporate in every sectors . I feel this way because of an incident in my friends life.As a dentist he was very good in extractions of tooth and he always try to work in his comfort zone. He never wants to crack the shell of comfortness.Unfortunately he got transfer which he didnt ask forr. In the new place he asked to do rootcanals . He felt it very difficult and stressful and end up in resigning the job.

In conclusion i strongly beleives in the idea of doing different type of tasks in each day of work which will lead to more productive results . Moreover proffessional satisfaction.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67601246106 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99660715441 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.969817568 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2941176471 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209361391583 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667458687227 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613819467131 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149052697078 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700210872027 0.0645574589148 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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