Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass windows. There are, however, several solutions that responsible businesses can use to prevent injuries to birds.
One-Way Glass
One solution is to replace the regular, clear glass with one-way glass that is transparent in only one direction. The occupants of the building can see out, but birds and others cannot see in. If birds cannot see through a window, they will understand that the glass forms a solid barrier and will not try to fly through it.
Colorful Designs
A second solution is to paint colorful lines or other designs on regular window glass. For example, a window could have a design of thin stripes painted over the glass. People would still be able to see through the openings in the design where there is no paint, while birds would see the stripes and thus avoid trying to fly through the glass. Architects can be encouraged to include colorful painted patterns on glass as part of the general design of buildings.
Magnetic Field
The third solution is to create an artificial magnetic field to guide birds away from buildings. Humans use an instrument called a magnetic compass to determine directions—either north, south, east, or west. Bird research has shown that birds have a natural ability to sense Earth’s magnetic fields; this ability works just like a compass, and it helps birds navigate in the right direction when they fly. A building in a bird flight path can be equipped with powerful electromagnets that emit magnetic signals that steer birds in a direction away from the building.
Both the lecture are reading discussing how the material glass which is widely using in modern architecture affects bird life.Birds are not having the ability to distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are harmed each year.Author proposes three solutions to avoid this accident .However Lecturer contradicts all the points present by the author.
Firstly author of the lecture claims that using of one way glass which is transparent only in one direction will help.He believes that if birds cannot see through the glasses they will understand that there is some obstacles before them .They will detour.On the other hand lecturer cast doubt by claiming that one way mirroe will work as a regular mirror . Birds will felt that reflections they are seeing are real and this will endup in same effect of transparent glasses.
In addition article state that painting glass walls with thin stripes will help for birds to understand solid barrier and avoid accidents. People would still able to see the outside world.He added that architectures should consider this of using colourful paints on glas walls.Lecturer is challenging author's idea by arguing that we cants rely on the idea of colourful paining . He contenses that spaces between these paints leads the birds of the illusion of open air. It is dangerous. He posits that painting elaborately by making the trasparent glass spaces very small will work to an extent . But he is of the opinion that this will make the inside of the room darker which is not practical.
Finally author is bringing up the idea of using Earth's magnetic field on buildings . He added that birds have the natural insticts to sense this magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away from the buiding. Lecturer rebuts this by poining that ,birds use this kind of magnetic field only when travel long distances like in migration. For shorter distances birds use eyes and light.Sensing of magnetic field dont work in short distances.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Birds
...n modern architecture affects bird life.Birds are not having the ability to distingui...
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...o distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are har...
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Suggestion: So
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are harmed eac...
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Suggestion: Author
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Message: Did you mean 'there are some obstacles'?
Suggestion: there are some obstacles
...h the glasses they will understand that there is some obstacles before them .They will detour.On the ot...
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Suggestion: On
...obstacles before them .They will detour.On the other hand lecturer cast doubt by c...
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Suggestion: .
...way mirroe will work as a regular mirror . Birds will felt that reflections they a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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...uld still able to see the outside world.He added that architectures should conside...
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Suggestion: Lecturer
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cant'
Suggestion: cant
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...s rely on the idea of colourful paining . He contenses that spaces between these ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ntenses that spaces between these paints leads the birds of the illusion of open ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...spaces very small will work to an extent . But he is of the opinion that this will...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...he room darker which is not practical. Finally author is bringing up the idea of using...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...using Earths magnetic field on buildings . He added that birds have the natural in...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al insticts to sense this magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away ...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...o sense this magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away from the buiding...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away from the buiding. Lect...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng. Lecturer rebuts this by poining that ,birds use this kind of magnetic field o...
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Suggestion: Sensing
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...yes and light.Sensing of magnetic field dont work in short distances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, in addition, in short, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03012048193 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5159110299 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.589481185 49.2860985944 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 4.19205298013 739% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261692680889 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832402005671 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713500672099 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164252123921 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685295943409 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.7273730684 247% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Birds
...n modern architecture affects bird life.Birds are not having the ability to distingui...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are har...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are harme...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...distinguish between glass and open air .So that itself millions of birds are harmed eac...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Author
... millions of birds are harmed each year.Author proposes three solutions to avoid this ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s three solutions to avoid this accident .However Lecturer contradicts all the poi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...three solutions to avoid this accident .However Lecturer contradicts all the points pre...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...three solutions to avoid this accident .However Lecturer contradicts all the points pre...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...sparent only in one direction will help.He believes that if birds cannot see throu...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some obstacles'?
Suggestion: there are some obstacles
...h the glasses they will understand that there is some obstacles before them .They will detour.On the ot...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that there is some obstacles before them .They will detour.On the other hand lectu...
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Suggestion: They
...at there is some obstacles before them .They will detour.On the other hand lecturer ...
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Suggestion: On
...obstacles before them .They will detour.On the other hand lecturer cast doubt by c...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...way mirroe will work as a regular mirror . Birds will felt that reflections they a...
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Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...me effect of transparent glasses. In addition article state that painting glass walls...
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Suggestion: He
...uld still able to see the outside world.He added that architectures should conside...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lecturer
...of using colourful paints on glas walls.Lecturer is challenging authors idea by arguing ...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cant'
Suggestion: cant
...lenging authors idea by arguing that we cants rely on the idea of colourful paining ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs idea by arguing that we cants rely on the idea of colourful paining . He conte...
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Line 4, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s rely on the idea of colourful paining . He contenses that spaces between these ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntenses that spaces between these paints leads the birds of the illusion of open ...
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Line 4, column 597, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...spaces very small will work to an extent . But he is of the opinion that this will...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...he room darker which is not practical. Finally author is bringing up the idea of using...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...using Earths magnetic field on buildings . He added that birds have the natural in...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al insticts to sense this magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away ...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...o sense this magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away from the buiding...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his magnetic field . This will makes the birds to fly away from the buiding. Lect...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng. Lecturer rebuts this by poining that ,birds use this kind of magnetic field o...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by poining that ,birds use this kind of magnetic field only when travel long dis...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sensing
...rter distances birds use eyes and light.Sensing of magnetic field dont work in short di...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...yes and light.Sensing of magnetic field dont work in short distances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, in addition, in short, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03012048193 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5159110299 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 145.348785872 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.589481185 49.2860985944 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 4.19205298013 739% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261692680889 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832402005671 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713500672099 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164252123921 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685295943409 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.7273730684 247% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.