Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agrees that its more productive when a classmate or colleagues communicate about a project in person than via email. I feel this way for two reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all ideas are transmitted best when a person talk to another person directly. It is mainly because when two people talk thay can watch each others face and expressions ,which is most important in communication.Even complicated matters can present in a very pleasing way. On the otherhand when classmates or colleagues trying to communicate through email, there are chances of misintepretaion of the ides. I can provide my experience as best example for this . When i used to work in a dental office , my collegues who was senior to me used to give me instructions of what should i do in the next day through email. Most of the time i felt that she was commanding and i felt very bad for her superiority. But whenever we worked together she asked me to do the same things i was willing to do all the tasks without any hesitation.
Secondly i am of the opinion that , when students or colleagues communicate in person the impact will be more. I beleives that in person talk will develop a good rapport within employees and students working together for a project. This rapport will definetely influence the outcome of the work assigned to them in a positive way. One of my experience is a good example for this fact. When i was a second year student in our dental college , there were a competition between nine departments of dentistry that each department should set up a museum , since its a museum we have to work together in the dental museum .We talked in person and express our ideas . Everyone helped each other and work hard passionately. Atlast we won the fist place. I am sure that that if we were assigned to work individually in each others place will not bring this much enthusiasam , which help us to make that event a succes.
Considering the reasons i mentioned above i am of the opinion that direct communication between people will add more values and have good impact in every field especially in situations where people work as a team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69109947644 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85185384416 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515706806283 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1330516169 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251235929074 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824025173486 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060083167062 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162005622786 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665303378479 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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