Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons.
Low Gravity
To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity. When landing a spaceship, the craft would not be pulled as strongly or as forcefully toward the asteroid's surface, making the landing safer than landing on the Moon or Mars; it would also allow a spacecraft to carry much more equipment needed to set up the colony. It would also be easier for the spacecraft to take off again, so the spaceship would need to carry considerably less fuel for the trip back to Earth.
Mining Valuable Metals
Next, some asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals that are relatively rare on Earth, such as gold and platinum. An asteroid colony would be extremely profitable and a good source of these raw materials. The colonists or businesses sponsoring them could more than pay for the cost of their support by mining minerals and sending them back to Earth.
Both article and lecture are discussing about the possibilities of starting human colonization in asteroids. The article claims that colonization in asteroids will be easy than that of moon and mars since they posses less gravity. But lecturer challenging authors claims with specific contradictory points.
To begin with author state that landing of spaceship will be much easier in asteroids because of their smaller size and lowergravity.He argues that spacecraft not need to pull forcefully while landing so that itself it can carry more equipments to set up colonies.However lecturer condenting that staying in such low gravity for long period will cause health issues like loss of bone density and muscular mass.
Secondly author posits that asteroid colony will be highly profitable since asteroids are rich with rare and precious elements like gold and platinum and there mining will bribg high profit.Lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that cost to support colonies , mining will surpass the profit.He also noted that increased supply of such rare elements brings down their market.
Finally article mentions that asteroids are easy to reach because thay come closer to eartth periodically .He added that it will be easy to get in and get out of these asteroids.But in contrast lecturer is of the opinion that when it comes closer to earth these asteroid are not going to stay the same point moreover they will travel to longer distances even more than mars can travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24789915966 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73870387973 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 21.2450331126 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.091541985 49.2860985944 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.166666667 110.228320801 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 21.698381199 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06452816374 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085278512647 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467018474074 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288698094224 0.0662205650399 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543043013271 0.162205337803 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213788025224 0.0443174109184 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.3589403974 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 53.8541721854 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.0289183223 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.42419426049 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.498013245 168% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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