should plastic surgery be encouraged?
Nowaday, plastic surgery is getting more and more popular for people. It can help people enhance their physical beauty, have real confidence boots and a better perspective for life. But in an orderly way, plastic surgery gives not less negative effects. In my opinion, I think we should not encourage plastic surgery because of some reasons.
First, plastic surgery will somehow affect the takers’ health because the takers have to take surgery and medicine simultaneously. Depending on the level of the operation, those that have undergone plastic surgery can have nausea, headaches, sometimes there will also be pronounced inflammation around the area in which the procedure was performed. We can say that: this is one of the causes for shortened life expectancy.
Second, plastic surgery is extremely expensive. The cost of each surgery is usually not supported by health insurance, so customers have to spend a large amount of money. So, it affects people’s finance.
Finally, there are a lot of potential risks in plastic surgery. For example, if the plastic surgery is done by an inexperienced surgeon, that has caused a lot of surgery failures and accidents, leads to the patient may become uglier than before or die. In 2014, Vietnam had a serious case: A beauty salon in Hanoi has admitted that they threw a female customer into the Red River after she died from their treatment. So, you had better be sensible if you are thinking of having it.
All things considered, knowing how to take great care of yourselves, being confident with your natural beauty are excellent ways for people to be more beautiful in life without having plastic surgery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10948905109 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64538880765 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8341055666 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389673628689 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124951841652 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105267269154 0.0662205650399 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198637999253 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683955593481 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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