Sometimes lies are better than truth

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Sometimes lies are better than truth

It always be a controversial topic that whether it is necessary to tell the truth all the time. Some hold the view that people need to say the true thing whichever the condition is. While others disagree for the reason that it may cause terrible result if tell the truth and they value the "white lie". From my perspective, people do not have to tell the truth in any relationship in any situations as the lies may have more power and contribute to a miracle while the truth may do the contrast.

In most conditions, telling the truth is the specifically important factor in any relationship. Only when you trust others and not tell the lie to them will them treat you in the same honest way. There are hundreds of thousands of stories to states that a lie has the power to destroy a strong relationship.

Be true to anyone around is quite a significant quality for a person, however, be true not means always telling the truth. Sometimes, it's better to talk nothing. For example, one of your colleagues is facing hard situation, and does not want his family to worry about him. At this condition, you'd better tell nothing about your colleague's troubles to his family but just to help him as much as you can.

In some situations, it is the "white lie" that saves one's life, brings confident and hope to people. When be told that the top of mountain is not far from here, you may gain the confidence and finally arrive at the destination, while if you are told that the peak is very far from here, you may choose to give up.

In a nutshell, telling the truth is definitely significant in any relationship, but sometimes using the power of "white lie" properly is much better than just telling the truth.

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Average: 7.5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, while, for example, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64724919094 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66369190284 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8453692465 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265073458723 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880347791048 0.0996497079465 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952455661919 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158941896291 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126612457026 0.0443174109184 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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