Spartacus: the rebel leader who fought against the Romans with an army of fellow escaped slaves, is one of the most famous figures in ancient Roman history. Spartacus led his men against their Roman oppressors and managed to defeat the Roman army in several battles. Eventually Spartacus and his army were defeated and put to death. To this day，Spartacus fascinates both historians and the general public. Several aspects about his story have made him a particularly appealing hero.
Firs，Spartacus‘ original goal in his conflict against Rome is one everyone can empathize with-he wanted to return home Spartacus and his men had been taken by the Romans from faraway lands In fighting the Romans, Spartacus and his men initially sought to return to the homelands from which they had been uprooted Spartacus and his men's desire to return home is one we can all appreciate.
Second, Spartacus' initial success in fighting against the powerful Roman army has earned him the admiration people feel when someone who is overmatched triumphs through sheer skill. Spartacus and his men formed a relatively small, ill-equipped army; the Roman army? in contrast, was large, well-financed, and highly trained. Spartacus' ability to seriously trouble the Romans on the battlefield testifies to his military brilliance, making him a hero in most people's eyes.
Third, in fighting against Rome: Spartacus sought to liberate all Roman slaves and thus commanded respect as an early human rights advocate. Before his final battle with the Romans, Spartacus was sent an offer by a Roman general: if Spartacus would stop fighting, he would be made a Roman senator, a member of Rome's powerful elite: and his men would be freed. However, Spartacus rejected this offer because it would have left the institution of slavery in place.
This article and the lecture are about whether Spartacus is a hero. The article thinks he is while the professor owns the oppositive view.
First, the article claim that the reason Spartacus fought with Rome is that he wanted to return home. If he really thought so, he might be a real hero for his men. However, the professor points out that he defeats with Rome may only for money, which made him a person who just wanted to satisfy himself regardless others' lifes.
Second, the article thinks that Spartacus is so brilliant that he could fight against the powerful Rome army. While the professor argues that he only conquer the weak army. When the stronger Rome army come, the only thing Spartacus could do was escape.
Third, the article believe that Spartacus liberated all Rome slaves . This behavior is so kind in such environment. However, the professor insist this story is just a play. The European wanted to have such a kind person and then they created this story. it is not really truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 30.3222958057 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 175.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76571428571 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22445902979 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 419.366225166 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8917895908 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1538461538 110.228320801 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102854023816 0.272083759551 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375698572658 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377949389622 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616021165332 0.162205337803 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273637856656 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 63.6247240618 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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