Summarize the point made in the lecture ,being to sure how it oppose the specific points made in the reading passage

the professor not really feels that
the professor does not really feel that

Sentence: According to her opinion it will benefical for us.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to will and benefical

Sentence: She refute all the advantages which are mentioned in the passage.
Description: The fragment She refute all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace refute with verb, past tense

Sentence: According to the professor this sitution cause the cars more pack together lead to cause an accident.
Description: The fragment sitution cause the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace cause with verb, past tense

Sentence: The professor says that,it is true that smart car increase the speed of the car ,will cause the increase in the people to drive.
Description: The fragment car increase the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increase with verb, past tense

Sentence: Finally, the professor contradict all the benefits which are mentioned in the passage.
Description: The fragment professor contradict all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace contradict with verb, past tense

Sentence: According to her opinion it will benefical for us.
Error: benefical Suggestion: beneficial

Sentence: Firstly,According to the reading passage the smart cars are very usefull to reduce the number of accidents on the highway.Smart Cara are well designed with highly sesetive senor which cntoel the breaks and collision.
Error: usefull Suggestion: useful
Error: cntoel Suggestion: inter
Error: sesetive Suggestion: restive

Sentence: Even though smart car which highly sensor it causes the accidents if it fail occosstinally.
Error: occosstinally Suggestion: occasionally

Sentence: According to the professor this sitution cause the cars more pack together lead to cause an accident.
Error: sitution Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: So it is little resonable to believe that smar car reduce the accidents.
Error: resonable Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: smar Suggestion: star

Sentence: Smart cars provide computer contoller which can control the cars on highway and speed of the car.
Error: contoller Suggestion: controller

Sentence: More car on higway will cause the congetion problem.
Error: higway Suggestion: highway
Error: congetion Suggestion: condition

Sentence: Because the smart cars have expansive sensor and advance technology which so expensive than brakea and tires.
Error: brakea Suggestion: brake

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2

Number of Paragraphs: 5 4

The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Don't need a conclusion.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 16 12
No. of Words: 256 250
No. of Characters: 1243 1200
No. of Different Words: 113 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.855 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.321 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.738 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.637 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4