summarize the point made in the lecture ,being sure how they answer then specific problem mentioned in the reading passage .
Rembrandt Painting
The given reading passage mentioned the problems with the origine of the Rembrandt painting konw as " Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet.There are total three problem mentioned with the collar , lightand shadow and wooden panel of painting. However in the lecture the professor provide the appropriate answers to these problems.
Firstly,in the passage it is mention that the woman wear luxurious fur collar. This show incosistency in the painting because Rembrandt had the good knowledge od the dressing sence. Accoding to the lectuer it is true that she wear fur collar but it is modified before 100 years back to increase the value of the panting.
Secondly, the woman face appear partly in shadow because of the fur color.Ii is also true why because the painting was modified by someone else which reduce the light refelction on the woman face. Other wise in original Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow. It show realastic effect in the painting but it get modified.
Lastly,The painting used the panel which was made of few pieces of wooden glued together. But in original the Rembrandt used only wood panel no glued panel. However it is also modified to amke the painting big one and also more valuable. This is all the solution to the problems which are mentioned in the reading passage.
Finally , the professor provides all the answers to the problems realted to "Elder woman in white bonnet" as it is peovide by the panel of expertises.
it is mention that
it mentions that
Sentence: However in the lecture the professor provide the appropriate answers to these problems.
Description: The fragment professor provide the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, past tense
Sentence: Accoding to the lectuer it is true that she wear fur collar but it is modified before 100 years back to increase the value of the panting.
Description: The fragment she wear fur is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace wear with verb, past tense
Sentence: Secondly, the woman face appear partly in shadow because of the fur color.Ii is also true why because the painting was modified by someone else which reduce the light refelction on the woman face.
Description: A WH-adverb is not usually followed by a conjunction, subordinating
Suggestion: Refer to why and because
Sentence: Finally , the professor provides all the answers to the problems realted to 'Elder woman in white bonnet' as it is peovide by the panel of expertises.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and peovide
Sentence: The given reading passage mentioned the problems with the origine of the Rembrandt painting konw as '
Error: konw Suggestion: know
Error: origine Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet.There are total three problem mentioned with the collar , lightand shadow and wooden panel of painting.
Error: lightand Suggestion: lighted
Sentence: This show incosistency in the painting because Rembrandt had the good knowledge od the dressing sence.
Error: od Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: incosistency Suggestion: inconsistency
Error: sence Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Accoding to the lectuer it is true that she wear fur collar but it is modified before 100 years back to increase the value of the panting.
Error: lectuer Suggestion: lecture
Sentence: Secondly, the woman face appear partly in shadow because of the fur color.Ii is also true why because the painting was modified by someone else which reduce the light refelction on the woman face.
Error: refelction Suggestion: reflection
Sentence: It show realastic effect in the painting but it get modified.
Error: realastic Suggestion: realistic
Sentence: However it is also modified to amke the painting big one and also more valuable.
Error: amke Suggestion: make
Sentence: Finally , the professor provides all the answers to the problems realted to 'Elder woman in white bonnet' as it is peovide by the panel of expertises.
Error: expertises Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: peovide Suggestion: provide
Error: realted Suggestion: related
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 253 250
No. of Characters: 1200 1200
No. of Different Words: 123 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.988 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.743 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.359 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.642 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4