A local government must provide a safe environment for its residents. There are various methods in order to complete their jobs, such as building parks, public schools, larger shops, and other kinds of facilities. Evidently, different people have different needs. For example, the elderly would prefer parks to health gyms. Meanwhile, teenagers would favor skateboard areas over playgrounds. Therefore, if money had to be invested in building a new public building, I would suggest establishing a public library. I feel this way for the following reasons, which I will discuss in the subsequent few paragraphs.
First, drawing from my own experience, public libraries are widely used by all ages, from children to the elderly. When I visited South Korea, I was surprised to observe and explore a public library that was well-built and utilized by all generations. I really thought it was an incredible idea to have sections in the building, allowing college students to research computers, high school students to study on the second floor, children to hear story-telling, and the elderly to play chess while listening to audios. Consequently, a public library would be best if one wants all people to enjoy it, despite the age gap.
Second, it gives a person wider academic and entertainment opportunities. Putting my point into perspective, libraries are usually known for reading books. However, with the large donation, I am deeply convinced that it can be more than that in many aspects. Aside from books, the library can provide citizens with devices, DVDs, clubs, study rooms, activities, and many more. For instance, there could be a writing club, book review discussion, spelling competition, and other various types of events. It is crystal clear that a library can give a variety of things, similar to a park and a pool, but more.
To sum up, I believe a public library is the best option since it is likely to be loved by everyone regardless of their age. It can also provide academic doors alongside entertainment through public lectures, indoor activities, and campaigns. The local government should spend its money on constructing a library rather than a park and pool to enhance the quality of life of the natives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 365.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14246575342 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8611923157 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 145.348785872 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.706151702 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.85 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0404460949312 0.272083759551 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0126589508798 0.0996497079465 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252741482449 0.0662205650399 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023924261758 0.162205337803 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197778452437 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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