Suppression of forest fire - integrated essay
The reading and the lecture are both about how many people prefer to consume entertaining contexts like tv
shows
or music rather than reading a book. The author of the article argues that less reading can impair people’s intellectual settlement for several reasons. The lecturer disputes the claims mentioned in the article. Her position is that reading fewer books cannot associate with cultural accumulation. Besides, people persist in learning new things with music or art.
According to the reading, literature is firmly dependent on intellectual stimulation. The article mentions that literature cultivates the encouragement to learn new information about peoples’ social skills which include empathizing, expanding their understanding, etc. this argument is challenged by the lecturer. she claims that although literature is an exclusive way to expand people’s knowledge, it cannot solely represent lower cultural standards. Additionally, people can reach plenty of different materials to change their environment positively. therefore, the lecturer suggests that people can watch high-qualified tv
shows
, movies, or music.
Secondly, the author points out that there is one more problem. people have switched their reading habits from quality books to poorly written books. Moreover, the article notes that fast-consuming contexts, like tv or web page videos, are wasting people’s time. The lecturer, however, asserts that having less time the literature does not mean wasting time. there are also lots of scientific or political contexts to develop people understanding.
Finally, the author puts forth the idea that the more good-written books, the more enthusiasm to reading a book. The author contends that writing a good novel, reading a book, and investing in the new book is a kind of loop. If the authors write good books, the audiences will be more willing to read a book. therefore that circle will continue to invest in new masterpieces. In contrast, the lecturer’s stance is that this process cannot depend on just the audience, it also depends on the authors’ writing skills. she says that previous generations’ authors had more skills about write a book. however, new authors should take responsibility to write a good quality book.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lectual settlement for several reasons. The lecturer disputes the claims mentioned ...
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Suggestion: She
...argument is challenged by the lecturer. she claims that although literature is an e...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...to change their environment positively. therefore, the lecturer suggests that people can ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople can watch high-qualified tv shows , movies, or music. Secondly, th...
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Suggestion: People
...nts out that there is one more problem. people have switched their reading habits from...
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Suggestion: There
... literature does not mean wasting time. there are also lots of scientific or politica...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a book, and investing in the new book is a kind of loop. If the authors write goo...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...es will be more willing to read a book. therefore that circle will continue to invest in ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...es will be more willing to read a book. therefore that circle will continue to invest in ...
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Suggestion: She
...depends on the authors’ writing skills. she says that previous generations’ authors...
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Suggestion: However
...ors had more skills about write a book. however, new authors should take responsibility...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 347.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63688760807 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9570459509 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5939676885 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0434782609 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 63.6247240618 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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