threes theories to explain the argument that Antarctica was as much as 100°C warmer, supporting richer ecosystem than it is today
The reading material states threes theories to explain the argument that Antarctica was as much as 100°C warmer, supporting richer ecosystem than it is today, while the speaker claims that the theories are too unconvincing to support the reading's argument.
First, the writer mentions that the evidence of pollen grains might prove that Antarctica 15 millions years ago was warm enough to ensure plants to grow normally. The lecturer does not think this theory is watertight. According to her, pollen grains were light enough to be carried by wind to thousands of kilometers away; therefore, the pollen grains could be produced by the plants from nearby places, like South America and New Zealand, and traveled into the Antarctica with wind or ocean water.
Another important point made in the passage is that the climbing level of CO2 might be caused by the confirmed major volcanic activity during the Middle Miocene, and CO2 is linked to the climate warming. The professor refutes this flawy argument by mentioning the fact that the recent research shows that the CO2 level was much lower than it is today. Thus, the Antarctica 15 million years ago may not undergo the climate warming.
Finally, the author asserts that deuterium and increased rainfall might have something to do with the high temperature in Antarctica. The professor casts doubts on this weak argument. According to her, different plants have various capacity of absorbing the deuterium; therefore, it is possible that certain types of plants in Antarctica might have the ability to absorb the large amount of deuterium. In this way, the amount of deuterium could indicate the increased rainfall not to mention the climate warming.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readings'' or 'reading's'?
Suggestion: readings'; reading's
...ies are too unconvincing to support the readings argument. First, the writer mentions...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...undergo the climate warming. Finally, the author asserts that deuterium and in...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287128712871 0.261695866417 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.161716171617 0.158904122519 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0693069306931 0.0723426182421 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528052805281 0.0435111971325 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.016501650165 0.0277247811725 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115511551155 0.128828473217 90% => OK
Participles: 0.042904290429 0.0370669169778 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51602016923 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039603960396 0.0208969081088 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118811881188 0.128158765124 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023102310231 0.0158828679856 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1710.0 1645.83664459 104% => OK
No of words: 277.0 271.125827815 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17328519856 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42238267148 0.374372842146 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296028880866 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220216606498 0.187439937562 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12274368231 0.113142543107 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51602016923 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.0511453405 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1818181818 21.7502111507 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1387696914 49.3711431718 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.454545455 132.220823453 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 21.7502111507 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.878197800319 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 54.7847062685 50.5018328374 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.92857142857 1.90840788429 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42423877598 0.549887131256 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118972736662 0.142949733639 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101514833143 0.0787303798458 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.670615897673 0.631733273073 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206527382867 0.139662658121 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187712797338 0.266732575781 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178356608652 0.103435571967 172% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396803188548 0.414875509568 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796371687646 0.0530846634433 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331634971178 0.40443939384 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226452467156 0.0528353158467 429% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.49668874172 200% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.