TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people

The article states that team work is one of the best ways in order to approach new projects and three reasons are presented to support the idea. However, the professor explains that in some cases not only the group work does not lead to a constructive solution, but also it can be harmful in the process of approaching the project. In order to support his idea, the professor refutes each reason in the reading.

First, the reading claims that due to wider range of knowledge and expertise in a group it is expected the team handle the project more effectively. The professor refutes this point by saying that there are cases in which some members in a team do not contribute in the project and this way some human resources are wasted since others should undertake the remaining tasks.

Second the reading posits that by employing group work strategy toward projects it is likely that more creative ideas be presented. On the other hand the professor states that this opinion is not likely to be true. To this end the professor claims that sometimes more influential members of a team may direct the group attitude about presented ideas. Which finally results in inferior quality of work when compared to individual based attitude toward the project.

Third, the reading says that participating in groups is beneficial in individual point of view, since members of the group who are influential in making decisions feel better by being recognized. In contrast the professor opposes the point by explaining that in groups all the members feel recognition evenly and the individuals who were influential in the process of the project receive less that what the deserve.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e group attitude about presented ideas. Which finally results in inferior quality of ...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ons feel better by being recognized. In contrast the professor opposes the point by expl...
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Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s of the project receive less that what the deserve.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'in contrast', 'in some cases', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264214046823 0.261695866417 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.177257525084 0.158904122519 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0602006688963 0.0723426182421 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535117056856 0.0435111971325 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0133779264214 0.0277247811725 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150501672241 0.128828473217 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0535117056856 0.0370669169778 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58034224246 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267558528428 0.0208969081088 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.140468227425 0.128158765124 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0100334448161 0.0158828679856 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167224080268 0.0114777025283 146% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1676.0 1645.83664459 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 271.125827815 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94326241135 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04852973271 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358156028369 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265957446809 0.287516216867 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177304964539 0.187439937562 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117021276596 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58034224246 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492907801418 0.539623497131 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.760655251 53.8517498576 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6363636364 21.7502111507 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2121688284 49.3711431718 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.363636364 132.220823453 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 21.7502111507 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.878197800319 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 52.2321083172 50.5018328374 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.91780821918 1.90840788429 100% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576653830655 0.549887131256 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172239328048 0.142949733639 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0745309308987 0.0787303798458 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.70292573247 0.631733273073 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120040242877 0.139662658121 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321141389671 0.266732575781 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786728124849 0.103435571967 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462056454968 0.414875509568 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0632677723724 0.0530846634433 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.443599908029 0.40443939384 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409307929135 0.0528353158467 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.49668874172 257% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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