TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa

The passage explains that dinosaurs were endotherms who could maintain their temperature as per the environment. Whereas, the lecture illustrates the points that can challenge the reasonings of dinosaurs being endotherms. The lecture includes major three arguments to rule out the endothermy hypothesis of dinosaurs.

Firstly, from the fossils, it is clarified that the fossils are much warmer in present. Talking about the polar dinosaurs, they might migrate to some other places or hibernate all winter as other reptiles did. There is no evidence that they stayed active in such cold climate maintaining temperature above such surrounding. So, it cannot be proved that they were endotherms.

Secondly, in passage, it is explained how leg position and movement are related to endothermy. According to the passage, it is said that endothermy sustained for movement like running However, the lecture clarifies that the underneath position of legs on dinosaur 's body is to support its more weight like in crocodile. In the same way, underneath legs are more helpful for densely growing body of dinosaurs to shore up the entire body. Therefore, the theory on legs position and endothermy is ruled out.

Thirdly, apart from haversian canals, there were presence of growth rings too. Growing rings were thickening of bone when dinosaur stopped growing. This means they could grow rapidly sometimes, very slowly in cold and stop growing at times. This rules out the reasoning that bone structure, haversian canals enhanced rapid growth of dinosaurs.

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Average: 9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir temperature as per the environment. Whereas, the lecture illustrates the points tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, apart from, talking about, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39094650206 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72667829223 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1321678144 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440671423898 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125959855143 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634626435087 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222117049121 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386954286467 0.0443174109184 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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