The reading and the lecture discuss the accuracy of chevalier memoir wich he described his adventures and his glamorous life.
Firstly, the author point out that the chevalier was poor that’s why he borrowed a money, while the lecturer statues that borrowing money is not necessary a signe of poverty and argues by saying that the chevalier was a fan of parties and grumbling and maybe that was the reason for asking money and if he selled one of his proprieties it took time take time to get money.
Secondly, the author believes that it is impossible that the chevalier can keep in memory a long conversation like he did with his conversation with Voltaire and it is for sure that he missed or added an important information, in contrast the lecturer mentiones that the chevalier wrote a notes from this conversation in the same night and used it as reference when he wrote the memoir.
Thirdly, the author statues that the chevalier’s story about escaping from jail is not accurate and abuts the fact that the chevalier made a hole in the ceiling, he claims that the chevalier benefited from a bribe because he has a good relationships in political field. In other hand the lecturer states that the chevalier wrote the truth because after a few months after his escape the jail fixed some issues in jail ceiling and that proves that the chevalier escape.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a note' or simply 'notes'?
Suggestion: a note; notes
...urer mentiones that the chevalier wrote a notes from this conversation in the same nigh...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81012658228 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67926176875 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535864978903 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 21.2450331126 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.103906947 49.2860985944 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.0 110.228320801 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4 21.698381199 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06452816374 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435261470821 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241712767257 0.0996497079465 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391691072913 0.0662205650399 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264299179154 0.162205337803 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153765141057 0.0443174109184 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.3589403974 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 53.8541721854 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.0289183223 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.498013245 198% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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