TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for

Unlike the passage, which mentions that people read less literature nowadays than before and this affects reading public, culture in general and future of literature, the speakers disagree with all opinions made in the lecture and provides details.

First of all, for reading public, the article states that literature is the only source that provides intellectual stimulation. However, the lecturer opposes this opinion by mentioning that it not necessarily to be literature book to be intellectual stimulating. She elaborates on this by mentioning that reading science, history and political science books are all intellectually stimulating as literature books, because they have high quality and stimulate imagination as well.

Secondly, regarding culture change, the speaker disagrees with the writer's opinion that people are watching television or music videos instead of reading literature book which lead to lowered the level of culture. The professor explains that there are alternative valuable material rather than reading literature or novel like watching movies or listening to music and this is because the culture has changed, and to meet this contemporary changes we have now many forms of literature which is not written

Lastly, the professor opposes the idea of the writer that literature is likely to decline because of poor standards today's reader. She says that it is very true that literature is less supported than earlier, but not because the quality of readers as it is the author's fault. She puts forth the idea that modern literature became very hard and difficult understand

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: writers'; writer's
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Suggestion:
...lternative valuable material rather than reading literature or novel like watchin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hors fault. She puts forth the idea that modern literature became very hard and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in general, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48995983936 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76878433157 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3389871853 49.2860985944 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.875 110.228320801 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06452816374 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503750821752 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219649082603 0.0996497079465 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865603675018 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302754130279 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552186260829 0.0443174109184 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.3589403974 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 53.8541721854 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.7273730684 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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